Pain on Pain -- Epilogue

[coquette7]

Comments

[nicci6699]

This was awesome!!!!! I love the way you ended it. I agree with you... sex wouldn't have worked with the characters at this point in their story. But I love what you did with this. It was so sweet. I was near tears when she said "I love you, too" and he said "I'm glad we cleared that up."

You are amazing, I can't wait for more of your writing!!!

[coquette7]

sex wouldn't have worked with the characters at this point in their story.

Yeah. That's what I figured. And I really, really wanted to write it, too. *sulks*

(Oh, well. I'll save it for my next story.) ;D

Thanks for reading, hon! And for taking the time to review!

[wonderstrucked]

This was beautiful.
I'm forever going to love your Edward/Bella.

[coquette7]

Glad to hear you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reviewing. :) *big hugs*

[coquette7]

Thanks, sweetie. :)

[sglitzys]

I love this ending and glad that there was no sex. It would be too soon for them in your version. I had fun reading this!

[coquette7]

Thanks for reading and reviewing, sweetie :)

[foot_tapper1]

Oh I loved how this ended. I was sort of hoping for sex between them but you're right - it wouldn't have worked at this point in their story. Saying that, what you wrote was pretty sensual! It ended up being better than the two of them having sex.

I loved the way he just looked at her until she figured it out. Just wonderful .....

Thanks so much for sharing this :)

[coquette7]

I actually wrote out the sex. That's why it took me so long to post this epilogue. It just didn't feel right, so I had to rewrite it. I'll probably recycle the scene in another story. :)

Thanks for reviewing!