Spiral Static -- Part Six

Jul 10, 2008 21:40

Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two
Part Three & Four
Part Five

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Spiral Static
Written by Coquette

Part Six )

edward/bella, spiral static

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ohbangladesh July 11 2008, 04:50:29 UTC
Haven't read it yet, but I was staring at your recent entries and refreshing it thinking part six is coming before midnight and here it is! Thanks for the update :)

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coquette7 July 13 2008, 03:36:42 UTC
Mind reader, are you? Or perhaps you speak things into being? How about you try to tell Smeyer to release her book at midnight tonight instead of waiting until August? It might work. :)

If you've read this part and are ready for the next, part seven is up now. Click here. Thanks for the review!

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Coding on Part 6 is messed up simplysonia July 11 2008, 04:56:32 UTC
Just wanted to give you a heads up.

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Re: Coding on Part 6 is messed up coquette7 July 11 2008, 05:01:23 UTC
Not surprisingly, I can't figure out where the problem is. :) Help?

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Re: Coding on Part 6 is messed up simplysonia July 11 2008, 05:33:51 UTC
From what I can tell (or at least how it appears on my browser), your last HTML code link for Part 5 isn't closed. Cuz for me, all the story text is a hyperlink.

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Re: Coding on Part 6 is messed up coquette7 July 11 2008, 13:37:02 UTC
Found it! I was actually missing the {/a} at the end of my Part One link. Thanks for the heads up!

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jay_hay July 11 2008, 05:03:58 UTC
PWP is always okay with me! I love this story! I'm excited for the next update! :D

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erinzomg July 11 2008, 06:18:36 UTC
What is PWP? =/
I'm kinda new to the fanfic lingo, if you will, and I'm not sure what everything means.
OOC? Help =/

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lockjaw July 11 2008, 07:06:19 UTC
PWP = Plot? What Plot?

Usually referring to stories that are all about sex.

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coquette7 July 13 2008, 03:42:31 UTC
*nods* Like mine! :)

Of course, it wasn't meant to be ... oh, well. :)

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bre2004 July 11 2008, 05:28:10 UTC
*gah!* How fabulous to have some plot, but how naughty to leave us hanging! *g*

A great, great chapter. I love the relationship that you've established between Bella and Edward, different from the books, but still very true to their characters (I keep saying that, but it's true!) and your subtle descriptions drive me mad, but it's all so wonderful!!

Keep up the great work, I can. Not. Wait. For. The. Next. Chapter!! I'm addicted, this has to be my favorite Bella/Edward fic to date (mostly because of your wonderful writing). :D!

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coquette7 July 13 2008, 03:43:40 UTC
You always leave the sweetest reviews. :) Wait no more! I just posted chapter seven. Click here. Thanks for the review! I hope you enjoy the new chapter.

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monstercrush July 11 2008, 05:39:57 UTC
Oh my -- Edward and all his naughty, wicked words. I love it! Bring on the shock!! This is such a great story. I can't wait to see where you take it next!

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coquette7 July 13 2008, 03:45:12 UTC
Naughty, wicked words are the best. Especially when they mean them. :) Next chapter is up if you'd like to keep going. Click here. Thanks for the review!

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