Spiral Static -- Part Six

Jul 10, 2008 21:40

Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two
Part Three & Four
Part Five

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Spiral Static
Written by Coquette

Part Six )

edward/bella, spiral static

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asweirdasyouare July 11 2008, 05:40:42 UTC
loved it. as like all of the other ones :)

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coquette7 July 13 2008, 03:45:44 UTC
Glad to hear it! The next part is up if you'd like to continued with the story. Click here. Thanks for the review!

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maudlin_romance July 11 2008, 05:48:21 UTC
Too awesome!!! I have to tell you I sacrifice sleep to read your story, and therefore, you should feel guilty!!!!! :P Naw, I don't mind. I would stay up till 5 reading it if I had to. A wonderful chapter, I love the imagery in it from the moor to the heather. Very beautiful!! I hope you post more really soon, as I usually say! xD

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coquette7 July 13 2008, 03:46:59 UTC
Ah, who needs sleep? I haven't gone to bed at the same time as my husband since I started writing this story. ;) The next part is up if you'd like to continued with the story. Click here. Thanks for the sweet review!

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maudlin_romance July 13 2008, 13:11:00 UTC
Would I like to continue... YOU BET!!! XD I wouldn't stop reading this if you gave me a million dollars...or Edward Cullen lol...

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abbeyroadd July 11 2008, 06:01:54 UTC
guh...yet another amazing chapter!
so hot and so beautifully written!
i looooove this fic :)

i'm so excited for the updates! i can't wait to be shocked!!
and you are so amazing... a ten or eleven chapter story!!! YAY :)

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coquette7 July 13 2008, 03:48:38 UTC
Thank you! :) The next part is up if you'd like to continued with the story. Click here. Thanks again for the review!

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lykwtf_x July 11 2008, 06:27:15 UTC
OMG! This is my favorite E/B story to date!

"Hush, baby girl. Just relax, and take it slow. I want this to last."

God, I love that line! He would never say "Baby Girl" to her in everyday conversation but it fit perfectly with what they were doing!

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coquette7 July 13 2008, 03:49:11 UTC
Thank you, I feel honored. :) The next part is up if you'd like to continued with the story. Click here. Thanks for the sweet review!

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jeesh July 11 2008, 07:06:02 UTC
Love it!
Keep em coming! My Twilight girlfriends and I are always gushing about your stories! We love them and think you should publish them in book form, lol. We'd so buy them!

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coquette7 July 13 2008, 03:50:09 UTC
Awww, shucks. ;) I may write a book one day. Consider this the warmup. *grin* The next part is up if you'd like to continued with the story. Click here. Thanks for the sweet review!

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jeesh July 13 2008, 04:37:33 UTC
I just read Part 7.
Another masterpiece!

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