Spiral Static -- Part Six

[coquette7]

Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two
Part Three & Four
Part Five

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Spiral Static
Written by Coquette

Comments

[mllesinistre]

Call me crazy, but it's not as much fun unless Bella gets hurt. I do love how Edward's sort of coming out his shell. I mean Edward complimenting her breasts and talking dirty was very sexy. But I hope he's not completely selfless the entire honeymoon.

Was someone watching them? Who goes around watching people have sex at midnight in the moors? Another vampire perhaps? How creepy!

And PWP is perfectly fine here. It's their honeymoon and they're doing exactly what newlyweds should be doing...eachother. lol

Keep up the great work!

[coquette7]

*grin* The next part is up if you'd like to continued with the story. Click here. Thanks for the review!

[coquette7]

You're not crazy. ;) The next part is up if you'd like to continued with the story. Click here. Thanks for the sweet review!

[moni828]

I think the chapter was amazing, like the others. I can understand that it can be dissapointing for Bella to not make him "happy", but I guess that's what he needs. Edward is <3, hee. Can't wait for more.

Oh and that place freaked me out a little bit too. LOL.

[coquette7]

Yah. If I were out in the middle of nowhere with the idea in my head of Bronte's Cathy wandering around ... I'd be freaked. I mean, have you read the first chapter of Wuthering Heights? *shudders*

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[maple_charms]

Nice! That was fast. :P Great chapter, as always. Update soon! ^__^

I liked it except the part where Edward didn't orgasm lol. ;D Hope he finds another way not to hurt Bella soon.

Yay for Edward's dirty talk ♥

[coquette7]

Oh, men don't need release. I think it's high time women took their revenge on them, don't you? ;) The next part is up if you'd like to continued with the story. Click here. Thanks for the review!

[hyacinthblue]

ooooo what could he has sworn her heard? Another vampire???

[coquette7]

Hmmm. Can't say. ;)

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[heartina_cage]

God you're good at this. PWP isn't PWP if it's clever, imho. Anyway, party on, Wayne.

[coquette7]

Party on, Garth.

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