Spiral Static -- Part Nine

Jul 15, 2008 14:55

Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two
Part Three & Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven
Part Eight

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rosabeth July 15 2008, 22:21:37 UTC
Ahh! That was amazing. Probably the best chapter yet.
The ending was so perfect. Edward dazzles me. XD
Haha, and Carlisle pretty much bitch slapped Edward, that was great.

Ok, enough of my blabbering.

My favorite line had to be:
“Hi, Bella!” came Alice’s chipper voice from far in the distance. “I’m glad you’re not dead!”

“Thanks! Me, too!”

That was great.

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erinzomg July 15 2008, 23:30:10 UTC
XDD
HAHAHA
Bitch slap. That was great XD
It woulda been funny if someone actually HAD slapped him. I think Rosalie would've been a surprising twist.. ^_^

Great story, this one, yeah?

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coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:32:40 UTC
Thank you! :) The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

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coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:31:15 UTC
Haha. Alice is definitely my favorite character to write. Well, aside from Bella and Edward anyway. :) The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

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melmelia July 15 2008, 22:21:46 UTC
that was amazing!!!! pls update soon! i am now very impatient to read all your updates!!!!

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coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:33:28 UTC
Thanks! :) The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

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foresworn July 15 2008, 22:23:52 UTC
Excellent, as always! ^-^

*settles in to wait for part 10*

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coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:34:24 UTC
Thanks! :) The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

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its_citrine July 15 2008, 22:29:46 UTC
very cute, love it keep em coming! ♥ you're excellent!

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coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:34:50 UTC
Thank you! The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

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morlockiness July 15 2008, 22:32:35 UTC
Aww, it's reallt that close to being over? This makes me sad! This is the best Twific I've ever had the pleasure to read; I love it.

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coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:35:14 UTC
Yeah, I'm afraid so. :) The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

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