Spiral Static -- Part Nine

Jul 15, 2008 14:55

Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two
Part Three & Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven
Part Eight

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avocadoshake July 15 2008, 22:33:24 UTC
LOL the end was very cute. I want more!!!

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coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:36:16 UTC
More is here! :) The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

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stephaneparis July 15 2008, 22:33:54 UTC
Aw you pictured Edward so perfectly, it's insane!
To be concluded? Oh noo.. :( I love this story so much.
I hope you'll start a new story after this one, honestly your writing is amazing.

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coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:37:21 UTC
Didn't I tell you? I have a little Edward that lives inside my head. It's not creepy at all, I swear. *eyes you strangely* lol... The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

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sataldajamahel July 15 2008, 22:36:34 UTC
Eeeeeeeeeee. You have made such a big fan of me. This story is wonderful. I love how the whole family just randomly showed up. And Jasper! What a great ability to have, lol.

Anyway, as always, looking forward to more!! You're great!

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coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:38:02 UTC
I love Jasper. :D The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

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angelus_buff July 15 2008, 22:38:35 UTC
OMG SO GOOD! And I'm thrilled that the update came so soon! WOW!

Glad to see all the Cullen's make an appearance. And OMG I love Alice! When she yelled to Bella that she was glad she wasn't dead, I laughed so hard. She's such a great character. LOL

Tons of little moments that made me literally go 'awwwww' (-out loud too! LOL) but these are my favorites:

-He smiled down at me - finally, a real smile - but it was sad and reflective. “You brave little girl, you,” he whispered, touching the planes of my cheek.

-Again he smoothed my hair back, tracing his hand down my cheek and neck as if he were framing my face. “You can just look at me and lift me up when I’m at my very lowest.”

-"I love you so much, Edward. I don’t tell you that enough, do I?”
His eyes cracked open to look at me. “Only every time I hear you say my name, love.” *flails* GAH! LOL ( ... )

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coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:38:35 UTC
Thank you, sweetie! :) That was a fun chapter to write. Probably my favorite. The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

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apesy July 15 2008, 22:38:43 UTC
You really are an excellent writer... please post the conclusion soon...
And what did Alice see in the end?!?!?!?!
I am really intrigued!

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coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:39:08 UTC
You'll find out! :) The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

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