Comments | coquette7: Spiral Static -- Part Nine

coquette7

Spiral Static -- Part Nine

Jul 15, 2008 14:55

Summary: His lips were still curled in a smile as he touched them to mine again and again in a rain of soft kisses. “I’m not laughing at you,” he repeated, each word whispered between a kiss. “I’m adoring you.” Edward/Bella.

Previous Installments:
Part One
Part Two
Part Three & Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven
Part Eight

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Spiral Static ( Read more... )

edward/bella, spiral static

Comments 164

simplysonia July 15 2008, 22:45:16 UTC

You, Edward Cullen, are simultaneously the strongest person and the biggest coward I have ever met.

BINGO!

I was so very happy to see Edward let Bella guide him in the last part of this chapter, and that he FINALLY got to enjoy himself!

And I'm still laughing at the fact he threw her in the water! I hate idle threats so it's EXTREMELY satisfying to know there are people/vampires who follow through, ha ha.

coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:40:12 UTC

Hahaha. Glad you enjoyed it! :) The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

edeainfj July 15 2008, 22:45:29 UTC

*happy sigh*

Yeah, I definitely love you.

edeainfj July 15 2008, 22:46:38 UTC

Oh, and have fun at the Coldplay concert!

coquette7 July 15 2008, 22:47:53 UTC

Thank you, I shall! I leave in a few minutes. I hope I can get all the comments answered from the previous chapter before then. :-D

coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:41:30 UTC

:) The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

catchester July 15 2008, 22:46:03 UTC

Still great. Very serious, jet still playful.

You've captured everyone perfectly. I love Alice :D

coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:42:07 UTC

I love Alice, too. She's one of my fav characters to write. :) The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

kallaneboi July 15 2008, 22:47:44 UTC

I haven't commented on the last couple of chapters, but they're great. As always. I think I cracked a rib from trying not to laugh very, very loudly at this one, though :D

coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:43:38 UTC

It was fun to write. ;) The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!

mllesinistre July 15 2008, 23:04:04 UTC

I wish I had Edward's power right now so I could pick your brain about any other story ideas that you have planned. You've become one of my favorite authors. I was serious in my other review, I don't want this to end but I know it must.

You're doing such a great job characterizing Bella and Edward. I especially love how grumpy Edward was in this chapter. It's very cute. And I couldn't help but laugh at how the Cullens and Bella ganged up against him. Poor Edward. Also I totally knew it was Alice who was giggling in the woods. Funny how their honeymoon turned into a family vacation.

As sad as it makes me, I'm looking forward to the next part.

coquette7 July 17 2008, 21:44:38 UTC

Haha ... I have probably 3 or 4 stories completely mapped out. I don't have enough TIME! :) Thanks for your sweet words. I love grump!Edward ... lol! The final chapter and epilogue are now posted if you would like to find out how the story ends. Click Here. Hope you enjoy the ending, and thank you for taking the time to review!