Citizen Erased -- Chapter Three

[coquette7]

Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two

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Comments

[annebloom188]

Bella Swan was absolutely obsessed with Edward Cullen
I found this line the most intriguing.

Because I've been the first three book again and its exactly how I feel about Bella.
=)

I have been waiting and anticipating for this chapter and thank you for updating.

It was a good excerpt and a slight development of Bella.
I like the way how you've maintained that certain air of annoyance when it comes to Bella.

I was never very fond of her and her half-succeeding lies and to think that you brought that up her as well.

Not to drag on. But well done on the chapter.
I must add that I am very interested to know why Alice wants to see Bella aside. =)

[coquette7]

Thank you! If you'd like to continue with the story, I've just posted Chapters 4 & 5 together as one. Click here. Take care, and thanks for reviewing! :)

[blameeve]

Cant wait for the next chapter!

[coquette7]

If you'd like to continue with the story, I've just posted Chapters 4 & 5 together as one. Click here. Take care, and thanks for reviewing! :)

[sporkedd]

ooh yay! new chapter!

poor edward, hes going to be miserable when alice or bella tells him that bella lied :(
i feel bad for him.

more please! :D

[coquette7]

Thank you! If you'd like to continue with the story, I've just posted Chapters 4 & 5 together as one. Click here. Take care, and thanks for reviewing! :)

[viceboots]

Oh wow....
that was an amazing chapter
i feel so bad for Edward =(

[coquette7]

If you'd like to continue with the story, I've just posted Chapters 4 & 5 together as one. Click here. Take care, and thanks for reviewing! :)

[ibelievemyheart]

This was almost painful to read, but in a good way, because it was like I was feeling everything that Bella was feeling. I have an easier time understanding your Bella than I do SM's sometimes, and that's saying a lot. You have an amazing way with words.

[coquette7]

If you'd like to continue with the story, I've just posted Chapters 4 & 5 together as one. Click here. Take care, and thanks for reviewing! :)