Citizen Erased -- Chapter Eight

[coquette7]

Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four & Five

Comments

[angelus_buff]

OMGOMGOMG!! I just checked my journal and went into shock when I saw this posted! I'm going to go read it now, but I just had to *SQUEE* about it real quick. LOL This is so exciting!!

Glad to have you back! *HUGS* Feedback to follow soon.
~Cat~

[coquette7]

Glad to be back. ;) *hugs*

[angelus_buff]

OH WOW! Well, for being "rusty" you sure do put out an excellent chapter! LOL This was great, hun!

Loved how 'loving' Edward was with his gestures (rubbing her palm, touching her pretty much all the time, etc), I adore that about him. Can't believe he'd let her go to the taxi alone though, that doesn't make much sense. O_o

Loved her reading the journal on the plane and getting embarrased about their previous plane ride. LOL

I just plain ole love Bella. Everything about her. LOL How she sometimes talks about herself in the third person to Edward, how she felt sorry for Bella while walking through the tunnels, and how she vows to dismember Mikail for hurting Edward. *grins* You go girl! LOL

Hate the Volturi, cuz they're pricks. Especially Aro and Caius. Oh, and Jane -bitch. LOL

And OMG I LOVE the way the chapter ended!! Such an awesome way to stop it! :) I can't wait to see what happens next; how Bella gets out of her little spot of trouble, how Edward reacts, etc, etc. SO EXCITING!!! :D LOL

Anyway, I'll stop the ramble now. SO

[coquette7]

"Can't believe he'd let her go to the taxi alone though, that doesn't make much sense. O_o"

Don't worry. It will. :)

[starrybella]

Omggggggggg :O

*reading now!!!*

[coquette7]

Hope you like. :)

[starrybella]

*flails* omg, that was definately awsome, please dont fret, you did a wonderful job.
All the usual amounts of tension and bella-worry, haha.

thaaank youuuu! pleassee dont take to long next time ;)

[coquette7]

Thank you! :) I've posted the next chapter if you'd like to read it. It's posted here. Thanks for reviewing!

[x_x_mint]

So glad to see you're back! Will you be updating your other story soon? 0:) Gonna go read this nao.

[coquette7]

Not until I finish this one. I'm so scatterbrained right now and burned out from the novel writing that I need to concentrate on one thing at a time, I think. Besides, another two or three chapters will finish this one up. :)

[coquette7]

Thank you! :) I've posted the next chapter if you'd like to read it. It's posted here. Thanks for reviewing!

[hyperprincess]

You are the most evil author on the planet with that last set of lines.

Other than that, I thought that was fantastic! I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter!

[coquette7]

Thank you! :) I've posted the next chapter if you'd like to read it. It's posted here. Thanks for reviewing!

[hyperprincess]

I actually JUST finished reading the next chapter! Once again...EVIL!...but amazing.

Before I even read:

[potterentourage]

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *FLAILS*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! You came back! You came back! *weeps uncontrollably while scrolling up to read latest chapter!* YES!

Re: Before I even read:

[potterentourage]

i can't believe Edward left her alone, even for a second! What did mikhail do, throw his thoughts like people throw voices? And is it wrong that i still find him sexy, especially when he delievered those last lines? XD Can't wait till your novel is out, I'm so first in line for it!

Re: Before I even read:

[coquette7]

Thank you! :) I've posted the next chapter if you'd like to read it. It's posted here. Thanks for reviewing!