Citizen Erased -- Epilogue

Jun 07, 2009 16:27

Summary: Disoriented after her transformation into a vampire, Bella struggles with amnesia. As she learns to control her new powers and abilities, she must also come to terms with what she is ... and with the vampire she doesn’t remember marrying. Bella/Edward.

Previous Installments:

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four & Five
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edward/bella, citizen erased

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thrown_rosesx June 8 2009, 00:04:37 UTC
Brilliant. I've been a fan of your writing since Spiral Static, and though I don't take as much pleasure in the Twilight fandom as I once did ... I can shamelessly say that I'm super excited for the next installment. :)

Also, how is your novel coming along? x

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coquette7 June 19 2009, 15:44:58 UTC
Thanks for the sweet comment! :) (Truth be told, I'm not taking as much pleasure in it either. It gets better when I stay away from the fandom thought. Weird, huh? I think the movie crowd kinda turned me off for some reason.)

The novel is ... infuriating. I want it to be the best it can be, so I keep rewriting it. Pretty much I don't know if I'll ever finish it, but I love my characters so I'm having fun regardless. :) Thanks for asking! *hugs*

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alisa231 June 8 2009, 00:17:12 UTC
“I don’t care what she saw. I’m fed up, Bella - just as you were last night in the car. I’m tired of never being allowed to be happy with you. First James and Victoria, then Mikhail and the Volturi. Now I finally have you in my arms, and you’re all in one piece. Favors or not, I’ll be damned if I’m going to let that spider, Aro, mess with our happiness now.”

^.^ I really liked that bit. Edward and Bella have definitely come a long way.

The ending broke my heart a little bit. I'll be eagerly awaiting the sequel.

Thank you for writing.

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coquette7 June 19 2009, 15:45:36 UTC
Thanks for reviewing and for the sweet comment! And you're welcome. *hugs* :)

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coquette7 June 19 2009, 15:46:42 UTC
If I can ever finish the darn thing! ^^;; Writing a book is so much harder than fanfic. It's nice to come back and play around with someone else's characters once in a while. It's like a vacation!

Thanks for the sweet review! *hugs*

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ultimatecozzie June 8 2009, 00:21:02 UTC
yay!
smexy epilogue ;)
I like it
I really hope you make a sequel. I want to know what happens to Edward and Bella. Keep up the good work!

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coquette7 June 19 2009, 15:47:01 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed -- thanks for reviewing! :)

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Epilogue, CE anonymous June 8 2009, 00:28:45 UTC
Long-time lurker, who for some mysterious reason wandered back to your site today after many months, thinking, "just in case."

What a nice reward. Thanks for finishing this. It was worth the wait. I hope you felt like it was worth the writing time.

Now that I've flattered, I'm going to beg. Could you try to throw up a chappie of "The Small Print" some time this summer? I somehow think it's going to be my favorite of yours.

-Abbabble

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Re: Epilogue, CE coquette7 June 19 2009, 15:49:04 UTC
I do want to finish up The Small Print this summer. I've been thinking about it a lot. Writing something that lighthearted and harmless is refreshing, and I've been in need of an angst break. :) Thanks for reviewing!

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