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coquette7

Pain on Pain -- Chapter Three

Jul 27, 2009 11:06

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demosthenes91 July 27 2009, 19:32:18 UTC

On his knees is good. That's a GOOD place to end that...she's a bit ticked and he's supplicant! Perfect!

More groveling, please.

(I'm an evil bitch - no apologies. )

:^)

coquette7 July 27 2009, 19:33:39 UTC

omg, bb

Your comment seriously just made me lol.

That's a GOOD place to end

XD

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coquette7 July 27 2009, 20:00:50 UTC

Heh. I think it's just hard for her to be too pissed at a hurt, wet puppy dog. ;D

Thanks for reviewing!

graphemes July 27 2009, 19:53:11 UTC

I'm really enjoying this. Thank you.

coquette7 July 27 2009, 20:01:09 UTC

You're quite welcome. Thanks for reviewing :)

hayley_cullen July 27 2009, 20:05:43 UTC

Ah! What a chapter! I love this one so much! :D Amazing.

coquette7 July 30 2009, 01:14:59 UTC

Thanks, bb. :) *hugs* New chapter is up if you'd like to read it.

iheartdougie July 27 2009, 20:05:55 UTC

I love it! they're sort of together and still have stuff to work on....like in a REAL relationship! yay for being original/real unlike everyone else! loved this chapter/whole story! normally I don't read New Moon fics but this was is just to awesome not to read!

coquette7 July 30 2009, 01:17:04 UTC

*sigh* Your icon makes me happy...

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and that you're giving the NM thing a chance. Haha, I *knew* this had been overdone, but I just couldn't get it out of my head. *ashamed*

Just posted the new chapter. Thanks for reviewing! *hugs*