original fiction: and you will hold my heart inside your hand

[corsettes]

original. pg-13. if she’s being honest, waiting in vain is usually her forte. 1063 words. title from lenka: we will not grow old.
note: written for solitude_82 for challenge #1 at inrevelations. thanks so much to eccentrical and lastupenda for the help and feedback ♥

and you will hold my heart inside your hand

Comments

[sophie_lizzie]

Aww, this was just a pleasure to read, dear. ♥ Plus the Rob Thomas part made me lol.

[corsettes]

thank you so much bb ♥

[explainingsound]

Shanice, this is amazing. I read it purely because it was better than studying and while I probably wouldn't have told you it sucked, I would have politely ignored it. Seriously, I loved it. <3

[corsettes]

lmao, dude, wow, you're paying me a compliment. i shall cherish it forever. but srsly, thanks bb ♥

[explainingsound]

DAMNIT, I CAN BE NICE SOMETIMES.

[eccentrical]

BEIHFBADSHIB THIS IS SO GOOD SHANICE. SO SO GOOD brb making a gigantic review

[eccentrical]

Okay I was lying because I can't review without sounding like a two year old. This is SO good tho', so different and SO realistic I feel so related to this girl, and the way you describe them falling it's just...so simple, so amazing, it feels like tingles ( see? totally a five year old!) this is my favourite, forever.

[corsettes]

ok i can't reply to this without sounding like a total 5 year old, so we're equal. but i love you for loving this and gahdsajdajdsa thank you <3

[askfor_me]

i really liked this. a lot.

[corsettes]

thanks hun!

[twistedaffair]

um so I basically fucking love this.
AND WHAT'S FUNNY IS I RECENTLY FELL IN LOVE WITH THAT LENKA SONG TODAY. NOT EVEN KIDDING ♥

[corsettes]

heathergram, you flatter me.
THAT IS EERIE~ LENKA IS THE BEST EVER.