[CHAPTERFIC] You Can't Take the Sky from Me Chapter Twenty-Six (Axis Powers Hetalia)

[cosmic_dare]

Title: You Can't Take the Sky from Me [FF.NET Chapter Twenty-Six] [ Writing Journal Previous Chapters ]
Pairing: AmericaxEngland, PolandxLithuania, GermanyxItaly, SpainxRomano, Belarus---->Russia, PrussiaxSwitzerland, GreecexJapan, HungaryxAustria. Future pairings: SwedenxFinland
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama/Action+Adventure/Alternate

Comments

[pantstacular]

This chapter was just so amazing I can't even. America you are as adorable as ever in your hero-ness. I just felt so bad for both him and England missing out on their date. Poor England...I honestly believe he may of been able to take out at least a few of zeppelins on his own...But the fact that they were surrounding the town like that really makes me wonder what is going on. But I do feel for America who really was looking forward to their date too

[sakuratsukikage]

I just really loved this chapter. I've been waiting to find out what was going on with Lithuania for a long time, and this really did live up to all my expectations. And you did an incredibly good job writing him and America together, really. I loved how their personalities played off of each other, how America was sort of torn on how to deal with him, the story of Lithuania's backstory, all of it. Russia's ideology, too, just made so much sense, and fits him incredibly well, I think. I really liked the viewpoint into the "villains" you gave us here, and I just thought you characterized Lithuania perfectly. The hints of romance were just perfect, too, subtle but strong, and Lithuania is honestly just so cute about Poland I can't get over it

[midori_lover]

AAAAAA UPDATE!

awww I'm sort of sad the date didn't happen but America and Lithuania's conversation really made up for it. Their interaction was just so IC it's amazing. I can really see Lithuania having that dream of everyone being a hero in their own way :D.

This was one amazing chapter! Will wait for more!

l-lol I was worried too that England would suddenly come and get the wrong idea when he sees America and Lithuania taking off their clothes |D /is shot for being a perv

[haro]

I'm glad Liet and America made up for the lack of date. I really enjoyed writing that bit. XDD

Oh lololol no. XD That won't happen.

Thank you!

[museofepics]

Wow, I think what I liked best about this chapter is your insight and characterization on Russia--you've made both his motives and personality believable, which I think a lot of fandom has problems with (poor, woobietastic, victimized Russia and complete monster, rapetruck Russia both make me go :/) and you've written him just so incredibly well.

America and Lithuania's interaction are really nicely done, too. Their personalities play off, and the way Lithuania is melancholic but kind of calm and nostalgic just really strikes me as deep and extremely in-character.

tl;dr you are amazing at characterization. You write well. I love this chapter. ♥♥

[haro]

My day was made when I got this review. I always get :D :D :D when people compliment me on Russia, because I get cold feet over writing about him. And yes, I dislike both of those Russia portrayals as well! My hope is definitely to have him somewhere in the middle.

Eeeeh, thank you so much! ♥

[revoiment_hika]

oh wow........

I always love every chapter in this story but Lithuania's story here just......... made me feel melancholy. It really remind me the feeling of adventure in the world I always dreamed of when I was a child ; w ;

oh well, awesome chapter once again! You really deepened the characterization of Russia and Lithuania here and BAM! you hit the spot bull's eye, dude. Also it seems really awesome how America and Lithuania made such friendship on such short amount of time.

AND DON'T WORRY ABOUT YOUR DATE, IGGY! YOU'LL MEET HIM SOON, RIGHTRIGHT?!

looking forward for next update ;D

[haro]

Oh wow, thanks so much!

That's kind of the feeling I was going for, so I'm really glad it came across like that.

And that's awesome, because I want them to both come across as complex characters! Also, America and Lithuania would bond pretty quickly in my mind, so yeah, I enjoyed doing that.

YES, I PROMISE HE WILL.