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[CHAPTERFIC] You Can't Take the Sky from Me Chapter Twenty-Six (Axis Powers Hetalia)

Jun 21, 2010 09:03

Title: You Can't Take the Sky from Me [FF.NET Chapter Twenty-Six] [ Writing Journal Previous Chapters ]
Pairing: AmericaxEngland, PolandxLithuania, GermanyxItaly, SpainxRomano, Belarus---->Russia, PrussiaxSwitzerland, GreecexJapan, HungaryxAustria. Future pairings: SwedenxFinland
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Humor/Drama/Action+Adventure/Alternate ( Read more... )

pairing: americaxengland, fanfic: chapter fic, character: england, fandom: axis powers hetalia, character: america, fanfic: you can't take the sky from me, fanfic

Comments 45

sephydark June 25 2010, 08:59:14 UTC

That was really interesting, and I'm happy we got to learn more about the Kosmider. I like that Russia's plan is a good idea in theory, an he believes that it is the right thing, but he's just... wrong about that. I also like Lithuania's quiet strength, and the way he stayed in the Kosmider because he thought he could do the most good there, even if he doesn't want to.

I can't help but worry that someone will hear America and Lithuania through the open window and cause problems for them. And I wish that England had been able to meet up with America, even if Lithuania would be with them. But I guess that's just how it goes, and I'm sure they'll be able to make it up later.

whethervain June 26 2010, 22:20:42 UTC

Character development! <3 Wow. I loved hearing Lithuania's backstory here. It added so much to his character, as well as to Poland's, Russia's, and the entire Kosmider. It adds a lot of depth to them. Plus, I totally squeed over Lithuania's descriptions of his dreams of traveling with Poland. So cute!

I also really love just how far America's come from the newly promoted Captain who saw the world in nothing but black and white, to this awesome hero who is listening to people he used to think of as the "bad guys". It makes me proud to see how compassionate America is while Lithuania gives his backstory.

I feel bad for England and America, though. Hopefully they'll get their date soon. I really loved the fact that Lithuania could guess that America was dressed for a date. For some reason I found that absolutely adorable.

koyuki_azumaya July 2 2010, 04:35:56 UTC

Ok, I spent last night and all of today reading through all the chapters and I LOVE it :D I'm totally hooked! I can't wait for more! :3

socialholic August 22 2010, 12:26:41 UTC

Late as always :'D that's apparently my trademark or something.

BUT ANYWAY, the chapter oh wow!

This was such an interesting chapter. I love action and exciting moments and chapters to bits, but I also love to find out new things about the characters, about their past and their thoughts and everything. So this chapter was rather brilliant in that aspect, and so very interesting! We didn't learn a lot about only Lithuania's and Poland's past, but also about Russia, his reasons and motives and everything. LOVED THAT LIKE WHOA!

And oh God, America being so excited and entranced about hearing Liet's story ♥ that's so him and so adorable!

Afskdlj and your Lithuania is so so sweet and thoughtful and just plain amazing I don't know what to do ♥ ! I love him so much in this chapter, your characterization of him in this is just gorgeous.

Also, I can never get over how awesome your America and England are (especially since they're obviously rather pissed at the Kosminder in this chapter xD).

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