Leavin'

[countingcr0ws]

Title: Leavin'
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: R
Form: One-shot
Genre: AU, Plain Ridiculousness, Romance, Slice of Life
Summary: Jaejoong takes the seat opposite Yunho.
Inspired by: Leavin' by Jesse Mccartney

Comments

[mcarol85]

:-) what a sweet simple and sexy story :-)
Thanks for writing

[countingcr0ws]

Hahah. Thank you! Thank you for stopping by to comment. I'm sorry for taking so long to reply, omg. Haha, thank you! And simple really is the word, lol. Straightforward sex, Hahahahaa.

[haru_ran]

That was sooooooo tempting. I really liked reading their little morning action. Very tentalising. *-* ♥

[countingcr0ws]

Morning action. Lol, morning action. What a fine way you put it, hahaha.
I'm glad that you liked it! Haha. And that you actually stopped by, lol. The whole thing sounds lame, lol.

[haru_ran]

Haha, well, I am glad you like my wording then. xDDDD /shot/
Nah, it is not lame at all. I really enjoyed it so thanks a bunch for sharing it with us. ^____^

[leesayori]

haha pervy yunho.
i cracked up reading yunho's thoughts. yunho getting a kick out of playing a boss doing x-rated stuff to his sexy secretary.
am angry with jaejoong. I was so looking forward to the sex part but then he had go ahead n kick yunho's jewels n ruined all the fun

[countingcr0ws]

HAH. I seriously laughed at that. Lollll. For a moment I was like whyy. Why are you mad with JJ!!! Then I was like omgzzzz, lol.
Haha. Jesse mc didn't have sex. We can't have sex either. Lol.
Hahahahaa. Thank you for leaving a comment! I'm seriously needy when it comes to comments like wtf. I need to reflect on that, okay. Like what I want out of this, lol.

[donud]

Please don't add "1" in your every one shot baby ;A; it's killing me ahhh~~~~

Oh I really love it when the authors of YJ just defines and focusing their routine of relationship more just like you wrote. Not just always write the shallow relationship of them

[countingcr0ws]

Lol. I burst out laughing at your comment, lol. Because I don't know what to put! Read here? Or link? Lolll. So I put 'one.' I've honestly mulled about that before, lol.

AND HAHAHAH, NOO? lol. Then my other stories must be shallow then. Hahahahaa. I suppose its not shallow as in most stories they're establishing the meet up, and then the development of the relationship. Whereas mine was like idk, magnifying a small scene. It's almost like what you get after a chain. Like a franchise. Like those one shot spin offs, you know, hahah. But that said, thank you. Really. I need to work harder!! Thank you for leaving a comment, so much. ); /honest crying.

[hikikomori]

so cuuuute! and hooooot and sexyyy and PERFECT! <3

[countingcr0ws]

Lol, lol. Thank you. Lol. I'm still far from where I want to be at, but haha. Thank you for liking it! ;A;/ I'll work harder! ;P