Paper Lies

Mar 08, 2014 07:50

Title: Paper Lies
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: PG
Form: One-shot
Genre: AR, Cavity Inducing, Ridiculously Happy, Romance, Slice-of-Life
Summary: Jaejoong's on a quest to find his ideal girlfriend while he engages Yunho on the side for personal entertainment.
Inspired by: Clover (Otsu Hiyori) Manga

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xzeffirx March 8 2014, 21:27:45 UTC
Yunho was trying to be a noble idiot, good that Jae had a quick reaction XD

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countingcr0ws March 9 2014, 15:37:59 UTC
Lol. I know right!!! Omg. This is like the second time that I began a reply with ikr, and I'm so sorry like I am better than this, man. Like I can write something like 'I share the same thoughts!!!!' Anyway, yeah. Like I guess there are those stories where like he'd let Yunho go and then it all ends, like omg, I'd like to read that and laugh my head off like you know plot twistttttt, lol. Crap, I'm so full of shit, omg. Like you know you'd expect the orchestra to go into a high and like the whole frenzy of vibrations but then it segues into a lull and then the conductor bows and wtf, omg, what am I even saying and haha. Thank you for dropping by and I think this whole comment reply thank gives me an outlet to spout my rubbish like omg, lol.

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xzeffirx March 9 2014, 15:59:52 UTC
Oh yes, I know the feeling you are talking about and thanks god your fic was not one of them. The last time I had this totally disbelieving reaction of "This is it? Are you kidding me?" was at the end of Prime Minister and I drama. Can't even guess how writers were able to slide down to such ending from totally good story all the way thru. So, hope to read more of your good stuff! XD

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marslokaret March 9 2014, 02:13:42 UTC
OMG!!! This is really REALLY BEAUTIFUL that I just can't get enough with just a oneshot..I mean their story is just blossoming and given the chance, I really want to read more fluffy/happy yunjae in this verse...

Another thing is their character....I'm so inlove with it <3
It is so ideal! Just like how I want them to be...
And thank you for writing it so well~

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countingcr0ws March 9 2014, 15:48:54 UTC
Omg- I just stopped my fingers from typing 'ikr' so I guess I'm looking for a substitute erm oh, yes, I agree ( ... )

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countingcr0ws March 9 2014, 15:51:54 UTC
OMG. I JUST TYPED SO MANY I GUESS IN LIKE SEQUENCE AND I AM EMBARRASSED, OMG. Haha, I'd edit it but I'm on the app and editing is impossible and I'm sorry for all the I guess, lik goodness, what has gotten into me, gosh.

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marslokaret March 9 2014, 22:53:50 UTC
yup ^____^ there was so~ many 'I guess' hehe and I think your reply really shows how much awkwardness you've felt from my comment (sorry bout that but reall, this fic was just precious) ^^

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tehah_hero March 9 2014, 08:23:59 UTC

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countingcr0ws March 9 2014, 15:59:55 UTC
I guess I'm having cheeks like that right now after going home for term break and I'm feeling very self conscious right now and I'll be consuming less calories to make up for it, and lol. Weird reply is weird and I suppose you wanted to say that that's your response, hahhahaha, and thanks, erm I think that its the first or maybe possibly the second time I've gotten a picture reply so thats a thousand words haha. Thanks for dropping by though. Really.

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tehah_hero March 10 2014, 16:37:39 UTC
co this is so cute that idk how to convey it in words ;_;
so fckin adorable omg..


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countingcr0ws March 11 2014, 02:54:11 UTC
Haha. Thinking about it, I just realised that I'm pretty over this story already, lol. Is that terrible. I was reading it and I guess I've finally gotten to that point where it just blur into a mess of words and yeah. It doesn't really stand out anymore, haha. But thank you! Haha. I guess I need a while to get off it and then it'll be like oh, I wrotethis previously? Kind of idea, haha. I was clearing my inbox and clearing the comments and I read through some of the older works and I was like hey, cool. I must have been on crack or smth when I wrote this, lala. Haha. Yeppp. :D calculating reorder point and safety stocks with varying lead times in class right now. ~~

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blaqang3l March 9 2014, 09:38:41 UTC
Awww...this is so lovely!
Yunho is so loving and caring and I absolutely love how jae confesses in the end:)

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countingcr0ws March 9 2014, 16:03:26 UTC
Omg. This is where we go like we all want a Yunho doll and things like that hahahaha. And erm yeah, I swear that it was the confession that drove the story like I was just writing to get to the confession, lol. Like I kept thinking like can they confess now, can they confess now. Lol. And haha. Thank you for dropping by and I'm glad that you go cheesed out, lol.

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kiboushinjitsu March 9 2014, 23:25:20 UTC
So adorable. Yunho is everything Jaejoong wants but was so blinded until the end. Yunho knew he wanted Jaejoong and I'm glad his sincerity worked. You should def do a side story in Yunho's perspective!

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countingcr0ws March 10 2014, 01:30:06 UTC
Yeah, man! Yeah yeah! That's definitely on my list of to do. Wait. Its called to do list and yeah. I'll surely be writing that, haha. And I'll try to maybe write a little longer like beyond and things like that. Try being the operative word, haha. But yeah. Def working on that. And I guess Yunho was just afraid because JJ likes vagina in the story omg. J am so crude. Nooooooooo. But yeah. Hahahaha. He just yeah. He thought that he couldn't beat vaginas. Crap I swear like afterj began writing fanfic, I just speak about the stuff so simply I guess like so impossibly flippant and its all sorts of terrible and erm I'm sorry if I annoyed you. :( and I'm like ohhh you saw that Yunho wanted him? Hahahaha. Yeah, man. Oops.

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