Paper Lies

Mar 08, 2014 07:50

Title: Paper Lies
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: PG
Form: One-shot
Genre: AR, Cavity Inducing, Ridiculously Happy, Romance, Slice-of-Life
Summary: Jaejoong's on a quest to find his ideal girlfriend while he engages Yunho on the side for personal entertainment.
Inspired by: Clover (Otsu Hiyori) Manga

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asafecracker March 10 2014, 04:05:58 UTC
I didn't know Yunho could be such a creep.. I always imagine him to be the 'noble' one, but creepy 15y.o Yunho could be refreshing. heheheh

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countingcr0ws March 10 2014, 05:09:26 UTC
/NINJAS OVER. Haha. I guess that he's noble and all like righteous like how Jaejoong said when he described uknow, lol. But hahahahaha. I guess that this's gonma sound really asshole but hahahaha, I'll be writing a part two of Yunho's perspective!! ;D So I guess you could erm look out for it, haha.
And creepy fifteen yo Yunho is like a fetus being creepy but fetus Yunho's already ridiculously horny over here already, soo... hahahaha

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shin_ah_mi March 12 2014, 19:02:17 UTC
sweet...sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet ^^
yes!!!

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countingcr0ws March 13 2014, 09:22:19 UTC
Hahahaha. Thanks. I hoped your teeth rotted and fell off, haha. I'n glad that I made you cringe with the sweetness and haha. I keep thinking about editing like the other I story I posted about like Yunho meeting Jaejoong in his cafe and ugh. I have to get it done. It's terrible. Lol.

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jaerin17 March 18 2014, 18:46:20 UTC
Dang! I was crying when I reached the part where Yunho was crying and he said, "I just need some time to let you go," I really cried! Haha! Thank you for this beautiful piece!

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countingcr0ws March 19 2014, 09:16:07 UTC
Wow, erm. Haha. /is awed. That is such a complete flattery, gosh. As in the fact that I moved you with words, wow. And I just reread it at your comment and I have the urge to edit it now but I'm on my phone, lol. I have anal tendencies and I think I've got the summary for Yunho's part but I've yet to even begin, haha. And I NEED TO STUDY BEFORE MY MEETING, ZOMG. haha. Thank you for reading and irrelevant reply is irrelevant! Heehee. and omg. Thank you for commenting. Haha. I've kinda forgotten that I owe myself and people Yunho's POV, haha. Thanks, really. You made me happy! :D as in the whole I made you cry thing. Why now did that come out odd! :O

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jaerin17 March 19 2014, 15:15:04 UTC
You're very much welcome! You really moved me with your words! I felt every word and my heart really contracts at that scene. You successfully conveyed it to your readers and I will be waiting for Yunho's POV. I give this story 5/5 stars. ^__^

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countingcr0ws March 19 2014, 15:27:08 UTC
Haha, idk if it was that great but you made me happier. ;A;/ I mean great time to reply, man. Like my day just became ten times worse and I guess it made me happier but I'll just lay here for a few moments and wait it out.
Haha. Full marks, erm. Wow. Thanks, really. Thank you for replying and making me happier a little. :(

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countingcr0ws March 24 2014, 05:56:05 UTC
Adult as in crazy man sex scenes? Hahahaha. Scenes like complete utter shoujo stuff? Lol. Lol. Are you serious? Hahahaha. But I'll just take it anyway. /runsoff with your compliment. Lol.

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atiqahyojin March 24 2014, 11:23:53 UTC
My dear... add me as a friend please. I just came upon ur lj yesterday and I havent stopped reading ur fics.

I AM ADDICTED hahhahah. Then I opened up one of ur rated fics and realised that is locked. :((

Please add this fan of urs and I'd greatly appreciate it. /Goes to read ur non rated fics first/ ^^

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countingcr0ws March 25 2014, 10:54:55 UTC
Ugh. I locked that up because its under construction and its so terrible and if I begged you to pardon me for all the bad sentences and stuff, will you go easy on me? I haven't reread the older stuff and I can imagine how bad it will be, and erm I think the one that's private is called erm erm idk its the one with the Yunho meeting his crush thing and its still sitting in my phone. Haha. /I'll work on it ASAP and OMG. OMG. CONCRITTTT. OMG. yell at me if it sucks!!! Omg. Like just be super straight and I'd shape up!!! Yeah, man. Please. Haha. Thank you. Erm I'll try to get that college crush thing down and I'll reply you again when it's back up? :O and omg. Thank you for dropping by! :O I am amazed by how people can find my humble bumble page. Haha. I hope that the fics are okay for you and if its not, YELL BLOODY MURDER!!! thanks, haha.

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countingcr0ws April 19 2014, 16:57:12 UTC
hey, it's open already. as in the story. :o

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atiqahyojin April 21 2014, 20:44:24 UTC
Omg u remembered DDDD:

Hehe thanks for informing me! I'll be sure to read it and yell at u if it isnt good but I highly doubt so. xDDDD

Continue to write awesome fics <3

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