Scattered Vertebrae (II)

[countingcr0ws]

Title: Scattered Vertebrae
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: PG
Form: One-shot, Sequel ( 1 | 2 )
Genre: AU, Generally Happy, Lucid, Slice of Life
Summary: Jaejoong finds himself walking on a thin line, wondering if having nothing, or nothing, is better.

Comments

[sachiel]

i lovvveee stories with multiple perspectives. i need to know what everyone is thinking!!

jj and yunho are so dumb lol. gettin themselves all worked up for no reason.

[countingcr0ws]

Hey its you! Haha. I'm currently not the most eloquent erm I'm actually walking to the nearest library to my dorm and the anxiety is mounting and this is the library I used to go last semester during the exams and times were really rally hard, what. Ignore me. Erm but yeah. I'm nervous for my quiz tomo /sigh. And literally. Like they both have such low self esteems and that ruined everything like literally so like can they just understand that they are both loveable and sexy and omg. Please. Haha. Oops. Walked into the grass patch while typing. Haha. And omg, I usually write multiple perspective stories. This and another story of mine are the damned anomalies. Haha. Thanks for checking my stories out. Really. :O

[sachiel]

yesss write more mult. perspective stories!!

i plan to eventually read all of your fics. (and comment hehe)

hope u did well on your quiz~

[countingcr0ws]

haha. i like that plan, omg. that was so shameless. omg. ignore me. hahaha. yeahhhhh. it was okay, i guess? not good enough though. those damned people in my class. i got 7/10, but the mode's at 8/10. assholes. omg. haaa. ignore meeeee. /hide behind hands.

[schloupen]

Come on, skinny love, just last the year
Pour a little salt, we were never here~

[countingcr0ws]

Haha I actually never understood the lyrics to that song but I just googled it and they said like the romance was slowly becoming more feeble, ie. Skinny. And oh. Haha. I don't remember but yeah. Oh. The salt is healing. Haha. That's what I read. Haha. I don't really know but heh. Thank you for reading and dropping by because I swear that the summary sounds terrible and I would totally skip it less I was desperate and I've got a test tomo and the previous one was terribke even I studied so hard for it (really legitimately crying) so I'm pretty unmotivated and there's four chapters and I only did point five during the weekend. I suck. Ugh. I'm gonna study now and my battery's running low! /flails. Thank you for dropping by, really. Irrelevant reply is irrelevant.

[geno_c_ide]

it's amazing how individuals live in their own universe... and yet in the end, we connect and meld perfectly, regardless of paths and decisions taken. you captured their universes well. very nice.

[countingcr0ws]

i've heard of meld but i've forgotten about it and i had to google to double check. i'd like to attribute it to the guilt of spending too much time online/ not sleeping enough, but i guess i'm more of an internal attribution person so i'd say that i'm becoming stupid. erm the last two words of your comment makes me smile and haha, thank you. i don't think that i can reply anything coherent and mildly intelligent, but erm i guess the idea of 'their universes,' of them being in different universes literally makes sense, like they're just so completely not on the same wavelength and their self esteems are so low, i just want to shake them. and maybe shake my brain awake too. gosh. i'm sorry for the late reply and thank you, thank you, haha. for coming down to read. i'm touch typing right now. :O

[srijoni_rhea]

this was so SO good! i remember reading the first part and i wasnt sure if that last bit of dialogue was imagined or not but now i know it wasnt and jdklasjdlk IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY! also i read a couple of your responses to other comments and i totally understand what you mean about reading two-perspective things and feeling it too repetitive and as someone who has definitely read too many of those, i just wanted to tell you that this DEFINITELY was not too repetitive! it was absolutely perfect, ugh it had the same feel, but actually two separate perspectives with such nice intense emotion omg you need to write more of this, i'm so desperate T___T pleeeeeease please pretty please with yunho on top!

[countingcr0ws]

omg, shit. you're so nice. like omg. you're so nice, i'm like awake. omg. has any online creeper like told you that you're adorable? because if none has, let this pervert tell you that. omg. you're so damn adorable, erm. let me gather my brain cells to type you something nice and of equal niceness as yours. gosh. erm so nah, it was real, like the dialogue was real, i'm not out to screw with your minds, and you should have asked! haha. i'd be like yeah, yeah it's real. why? i'm not that evil to toy you, hahaa. anyway, yeah. it's real and jaejoong took the leap of faith to say it like i sometimes wonder why people are so afraid to say it but yeah. nothing or nothing bla bla for this case, and omg, yes. totally. like i've read some and it's like i'm reading the same thing over only with a few sentences thrown in here and there, and i was worried like half the time i guess that i know what i'm writing, so i kinda write and apparently nobody understands me, hahaha. so i was afraidthat there was this whole i'm blind tothat thingy where like

[mb_lucified]

OHKAY. So I was about to shut off my lappie and then I see SCATTERED VERTEBRAE. TWO. Zomg girl you'll be the death of my limited sleep. I need to run around and scream and spazz before I calm down and start reading. I am so so so so so so sooooooo glad you wrote Jae's perspective about this relationship. :') I think I owe you a decent comment after going back to being a ghost reader for a while. Guilty as charged.

MY FEELS. No, really. My heart is pounding just reading Jae riding an elevator. The anticipation I can't-

The cologne had been the most subtle form of possessiveness he had ingeniously calculated to engineer right under Yunho's nose. So much green-eyed beauty in this line. I am never going to look at perfume the same way again. Ugh you make me want to throw mine out. Siriusly girl, are you trying to kill me? I'm not even a quarter through the text and I think I'm gonna cry. Am I scary you? Nah I think you've seen me scarier hahaha. Okay now I'm scaring myself