Tectonicus

[countingcr0ws]

Title: Tectonicus
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: G
Form: One-shot
Genre: AR, Experimental, Romance, Slice-of-Life
Summary: "When tectonic plates shift due to the restless magma, earthquakes occur." In which Yunho mulls about his relationship with Jaejoong.
Inspiration: The Unbearable Lightness of Being by Milan Kundera

Comments

[kattan69]

A lot of big words and deep meanings...

[countingcr0ws]

Ahh, there was? Omg. As in big words? Haha. I reread it again and I'm like :oo ahh, took me a while to find the ending. Lol. And I hope that I'm geographically correct. I just wrote based on memory. I don't think that I did very well for geography. Ahh, it was so long ago! /sobs at age.

[tapzz]

Me loved this...:D:D...possessive yunho is just.......loved the ending btw...:)

[countingcr0ws]

I KNOW RIGHT. the ending was like /took so long to come out. When I got it, I was like YESSSSS. seriously. Wait. Does it sound shameless? But I was genuinely like omg. The writing gods. //cries. And haha. Jaejoong is as possessive man. I can totally imagine Jaejoong being possessive. Lol.

[lindabelinda99]

gurl, where's my happy?

And lol, i thought you only did one update was like asking for more in the other one and then saw these and was like, oops haha, yay, blind doofus right here. So then i read, and then sad again. Well, not sad sad like the other sad, but like sad because of relationship problems. I guess we can't just pretend we live in a fluffy pink universe with sweet sugar and nice porn everywhere can we? Sigh.

But clingy and insecure jaejoong kinda just nailed it on the head for me. Love it. So does that mean in the end yunho toned down the crazy possessiveness? Because that would be nice.

The title's not that bad. It ties it in which is nice. Admittedly i was like huh, what is that? But you know, vocab and me.

Any ways, thank you for writing <3

[countingcr0ws]

haha, i updated four, so the nipples are happy, i guess. wait. as in the nipple story is happy. what. english. no. what, my english. nooo.
i guess like in the end his insecurity>possessiveness. like if he pushes jj too much, jj might leave. and he can't really keep tabs on the other now. so he's like dealing and swallowing it when they should be talking. like he's very insecure, and erm he wants to talk it through but he doesn't dare like what if jj leaves. did i answer well? i swear that your question was so intelligent that i had to reread it again and i was like trying to understand what i was trying to mean ages ago, haha.

ahhh, tectonicus is fancy latin for tectonics. i think, lol. i was wiki-ing and i was like omg, hey, fancy latin would make me look and sound and erm, be less dumb. so i just slapped it on. that's you and me both, man. and ahaahhaha. half the time i write to pass time, and i was counting like just now and i still have 79 stories. i'm crazy, lol lol.
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[lindabelinda99]

HAHAHAHAhahhahahahhahahha yes, nipples are extremely happy. Nice.

Aaah, yes. Im glad. Because that was along the lines i was hoping it meant. And then i hope they get to talk and then realise they're both insecure and that yunho really doesn't need to be possessive because like jj is a clingy shit and they should just stay together forever and ever and ever. Hmmmmm, yea i probs just ruined your story. Sorry. i like to wave my pretend magic around and pretend everything is good. I think yousa is in need of a sequel. Or that should be more like mesa is in need of a sequel.

aw, thanks. I haven't asked an intelligent question since...hmmm, since forever. Speaking of which, the title sounds super fancy. Should keep it. I think it's great using words people hardly understand (or is that just me?) as title so they can't judge and would just read. It's like tricking people to read hahahha. I don't know. I think that sounds pretty smart.

[shin_ah_mi]

that's very likely every couple struggles.......jealousy possessiveness and the possibility of betrayal....;;but love eases it isn't so?

[countingcr0ws]

But people are so dumb sometimes. Like my ex hated me talking to any boys. Like ANY boys. And I couldn't even complain and stuff. It was soo stupid. So I guess like it should ease, but people are so stupid so you can't follow logic when it comes to matters of love. So dumb. Omg. thinking about it makes me so annoyed, lol. People so paranoid yo. Omg. I just stopped my fingers from going on a rant about him. Lol.

[imanizzati]

When tectonic plates shift due to the restless magma, earthquakes occur. Time is then required for the displaced plates to find a new equilibrium or to return to its original position, of which contribute to a series of aftershocks. The lawsuit had made a bigger impact on their coupling than he would admit and while they both had become doubly clingy and increasingly impatient, all they needed was patience to work things out.

this. i liked this.

and i loved this.

"I love you," he typed slowly into his phone before sending it across the ocean, his limbs heavy as the monster in his skull slipped fear into his system.

Because of the aftershocks, the last thing to do after an earthquake is to stay indoors. As Yunho's heart beat to the spaces between the reply, he felt an odd sense of desolation as he huddled in the cold open space, clutching his last possessions as he waited for the worse to pass.

[countingcr0ws]

Ahh, I liked the ending too! Is that a weird and shamelsss thing to say. Butthe ending was like a gift from the writing gods out of the blue and I was like omgggg. Like I was stuck for so long and yeah. And like finally, I made a story that actually made me seem intellectual. Haha. There's geographical facts in this!!!