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Press '1' For The Love of Your Life

Jun 17, 2015 12:29

Title: Press '1' For The Love of Your Life
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: PG
Form: One-shot
Genre: AR, Fluff, Happy, Romance
Warning: Eight years age difference, nothing explicit though; Drunk people do not act this way, I think
Summary: Prompt- Accidentally called your number while drunk asking for a ride and you actually came au ( Read more... )

jaejoong puked, yoochun!friends with jaejoong, dbsk inception, drunk!jaejoong, yunho!gentleman, jaejoong!university student, nudity, jaejoong!virgin, accidental nudity, jaejoong watches porn/watched porn, yoochun!half present, yunho!lawyer, bad writing, voyeurism accidental, jaejoong!innocent, no sex as usual, jaejoong slept naked very very smexy, situational humiliation

Comments 72

titieyara June 17 2015, 05:42:54 UTC

the way they text each other is so cute

Jaejoong is so lucky that his drunk phone call end up getting new-more-awesome-boyfriend

countingcr0ws June 17 2015, 06:05:06 UTC

YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. omg, sorry, i was so excited because somebody actually commented and i'm so full i feel fat, and i reread their text exchange bc you mentioned and lol, ngl, i copped out because you know how jj texts with like rainbow smilies? and i'm like the most boring texter, woahh, i'm the one who gets tons of typos when i reply really quickly who doesn't bother correcting at all kind of dude. anyway, so i ain't using no rainbow so i tried to add some kamoji to make up for my lame ass ( ... )

titieyara June 17 2015, 07:18:43 UTC

why don't you make something from that plot?No, don't take me seriously.
But I can picture that kind of plot for them the sleepover without sex is good, they could cuddling all day long with Jaejoong rambling nonsense in Yunho arms.

countingcr0ws June 17 2015, 07:28:45 UTC

eh, the problem with that plot i vomited is that it's too fluffy with 0 character development. it makes me depressed as a writer. like i wrote a monster fic of fluff once and i absolutely hated it. i still hate it. :( anyway, hahhahhaa. that as in the sleepover no sex thing is too fluffy with like 0 content like my fic with jj making a lunchbox for yh. nobody read it, lol. it's a nice headcanon but it doesn't sell at all like whelp. it's too bland, you know. like idk, a really really thin slice of marshmallow. is that even a thing. and my long ass rambling plot is time sequential. yh would never allow jj to sleep over if they were just dating, lol. yunho that smexy man. /pokes his fluff belly. i can literally tell you which of my works are bland-assed and they literally don't perform, lol.

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countingcr0ws June 17 2015, 07:22:23 UTC

i just smiled shyly to myself. I'M A PROPER LADY NOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!! /HOLLERS.
lool. anyway, oh you flatterer, you used the P word, stick it in me, I NEED YOUR P. nice. wow, how eloquent. anyway, really though, you flatterer.

my brain's too jumbled :((((((((((( i just realised that i don't know how jaejoong really is like?? erm i think he's shy, innocent, a little child like, excitable and really caring. yunho's erm dedicated, lonely, all encompassing, righteous, intelligent. eh, no character development that's why. it's just a happy mess. wow, i need to look up on what's cd and how do i make it edible.

hinokahoko11 June 17 2015, 07:23:35 UTC

😍😍😍😍😍 i should probably get drunk and call a random person. May be someone like yunho will come.😻😻
Jae is so cute here, i love cutie kitty lovely jae 😙😙
please continue to write a cute jae.haha.
love this fic,cant put ic down eventhough i am late for the office😸😄

countingcr0ws June 17 2015, 07:36:21 UTC

so i was late for work for 10 minutes and i was marked late even though there's supposedly an allowance of 15 minutes, SO GET YOUR ASS OUT, RUN FOR OFFICE, HOLY SHIT. and loooool, ngl, some pervert will probably come, knowing out rotten luck. all dem fuckbois out there. /waves baguette threateningly.

anyway, can i be really shameless and say that all my Jae-s are cute? lol. lol wait, no. that's untrue. i can think of some where jj was a terror. omg. the jj in god cock was wow, i can't believe that i'm calling that fic god cock. bless the world. anyway, the jj in god cock was cute in a terrible way, lol. wow, i can't believe that i just unintentionally cross sell-ed you. i don' think cross sold is a proper term.

that aside, I HOPE YOU GOT TO WORK ONTIME?????

hinokahoko11 June 17 2015, 09:58:52 UTC

It's okay,we are allowed to be late by 1 hour in our work. hahaha. but yeah, I was late by 1 and half hour..So still.....late. >_<.
I'll check your other fics then. I am also hunting for good fics these days.hehe.
But I think I have already read your fics,but I'll check if I have miss anything.haha.
By the way, Changmin's princess at twitter had twitted to read this fic :) :)

countingcr0ws June 17 2015, 15:15:24 UTC

DUDE. how do you even 1.5 hours!! Holy shit. And a one hour allowance is super good, lol. I'd stroll in 45 minutes late all the time if I had that liberty, omg. And I don't even have 7 hours of sleep daily, haha. I read from the papers that <7= four times the possibility of stroke. OH YEAH. ~~~~

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2maluv June 17 2015, 09:10:23 UTC

This was so cute omg hahahah Jae is an adorable drunk if you ignore the vomiting and the needing to pee.
Love the age difference, bossy Jae in the kitchen and lawyer Yunho are so cute. Any chance of a sequel? They can go on a date and be all adorable and we can have Yoochun as a cameo who is all like whatcha gonna do with ma bff LOL

countingcr0ws June 17 2015, 15:20:59 UTC

Isn't the peeing cute too? And when he rubs his crotch, ohhhhh, I get a boner too, lol. Anyway, ah, that sounds fancy but like I have it in my mind that that'll probably happen like three or four dates later, haha. I'm filing another prompt right now but I'll keep that in mind. /WHISPERS ngl, but sequels are one of my weaknesses... ;A; I'm never cute enough for that unless I have it planned at the start. D: I tend to do pure fluff in sequels and it ends up absolutely rubbish and nobody likes them. /cries along the pavement

db5k June 17 2015, 11:18:02 UTC

this is such a nice fic! i really enjoyed reading it. heehee drunk jae is so cute. lol except the vomit part because ew i don't like puke or puking (i mean, who does? lmao) and them being fans is just awesome. XD i actually have a oneshot with yunjae as fanboys... but it's still unfinished >.> crey

anywaaaaaay lol really loved this and i wouldn't mind reading a lot more of this verse. so just in case you have even the slightest bit of an idea for another shot... just know that i am excited for it. haha thanks for writing and sharing this! ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ

p.s. i love your tags hahaha

countingcr0ws June 18 2015, 00:41:04 UTC

loool, dude, them liking dbsk is like my fave thing to put in, like woahhhh, double delusion. woahhhhhhhhhh. OMY GOD. i'm imagining like yj going to a con and they're right in front and like OMG, THIS IS SO DELUSIONAL, so like hero winks at yh (bc we all know jj is such a tease, and how can he resist a yunho doppelgänger, lool) and yh actually freaking flails and then jj tries to seduce the shit out of uknow from his position in jealousy and then au yj gets together after the con because they're both angry with each other and the stage yunjae goes like did you see them?? like our lookalikes and i can't believe you did that bla bla, hero goes like i can't believe that you thrusted your hips at him during hfb and they go all frowny and then they have sex, woooooooooooooah. anyway, that aside, yunjae liking dbsk is a thing, yo. like double delusion, say yes, and dude, if your oneshot ain't moving, just move on. be a shelf like me. we can line the walls together ( ... )