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Press '1' For The Love of Your Life

Jun 17, 2015 12:29

Title: Press '1' For The Love of Your Life
Author: countingcr0ws
Pairing/ Characters: Yunjae
Rating: PG
Form: One-shot
Genre: AR, Fluff, Happy, Romance
Warning: Eight years age difference, nothing explicit though; Drunk people do not act this way, I think
Summary: Prompt- Accidentally called your number while drunk asking for a ride and you actually came au ( Read more... )

jaejoong puked, yoochun!friends with jaejoong, dbsk inception, drunk!jaejoong, yunho!gentleman, jaejoong!university student, nudity, jaejoong!virgin, accidental nudity, jaejoong watches porn/watched porn, yoochun!half present, yunho!lawyer, bad writing, voyeurism accidental, jaejoong!innocent, no sex as usual, jaejoong slept naked very very smexy, situational humiliation

Comments 72

kiboushinjitsu June 25 2015, 03:07:50 UTC

So cute! Will there be a continuation of this. I want more and more! \O.O/

countingcr0ws June 25 2015, 04:19:06 UTC

i don't think so. D: i think it's not a very good fic when there's nothing but fluff because i literally want to write fluff and them being happy and when they meet there's the whole oh i don't know if i love you, oh no oh no drama going on. and i've written sequels of stuff that's pure fluff, and ngl, baddddddddddddddd reception, yo. /coughs into the drain. i'm sorry. D ( ... )

kiboushinjitsu June 25 2015, 11:35:27 UTC

...... I will take what I can get :). *hugs ramble to sleep hoping to dream of it*

serendipitycm June 27 2015, 12:15:28 UTC

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countingcr0ws June 30 2015, 06:43:46 UTC

yeah, jaejoong and yunho got together in the end, lool. like they'll even get married one day and all that jazz like in the whole made for each other in every universe bs (but maybe not this one /cries into your crotch) i can't believe that i went there, omg. anywayyyy, keep his dick in more like not going around to bone any random dude like hyunjoong, loool. yunconda is the bedrock of every yunjae relationship. /no compromise voice ( ... )

geno_c_ide June 28 2015, 11:51:35 UTC

i commend you, my dear, for writing a story with a plot and title aptly screaming 'remnants of late night binge drinking or days of unholy amounts of caffeine consumption'. whatever the actual case, it is reminiscent of great works of fiction which can only be crafted after a long, suffering torture that induces substantial parts of brain to ooze out of one's nose. the story is strangely coherent; yunho is a creepy gentleman; and jaejoong needs protection from others and from himself mostly. the main theme here, i think, is that yunjae are adorable idiots when it comes to using mobile phones, and i'm thinking they are prone to do something embarrassing or horrible (or both) given the device. but they were lovely, very lovely. and that's enough.

countingcr0ws June 30 2015, 03:59:04 UTC

Dude, your english is amazing, the way you wield your command of it is respectable and I could never dream to hold a candle to your prowess. Oh shoot, there you go commending my title again. But to be honest, the title was a revised version, it was initially named "Highway to Heaven" which idk, is pretty fancy too in this case, haha. But I was like /brainwaveeeee ( ... )

geno_c_ide June 30 2015, 10:29:58 UTC

you'd think we're having a nice little tea party in the backyards, sipping from cute floral teacups and nibbling on dainty cakes, while a herd of rhinoceros prances around the gardens and several skeletons and corpses of mail men, sales people and scouts litter the front lawn. this scenery as we laugh and giggle about yunjae matter like the evil bitch and friends that we are. i've no idea where these things came from... but yeah, whatever.

also, never underestimate the literary value of near-miss-porn type of stories. more often than not, they tend to be more interesting than known Canons and are several leagues substantial than fifty shades or twilight. in this time and age, yunjae and porn (of any degree) are all we need to keep sane.

lastly, boredom and monotony do fry braincells. thus, the creativity.

cheers and keep writing. ^_^

chloe1910 June 30 2015, 09:58:41 UTC

AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW, what a cute fic.

Jaejoong is so damn lucky the preson he accidentally drunk dial is Yunho and Yunho is a gentleman. If it's someone else, Jaejoong will most probably be taken advantage of. One good turn deserves another. By responding to stranger call for help, he's gotten himself the prettiest, cutest and the most awesome cook of a boyfriend. ^^

Do you intend to give this a sequel or write more from this verse? Would love to read more of Yunjae from this verse.

countingcr0ws July 1 2015, 01:57:17 UTC

LEMME FIND YOU MY LAME ASSED WRITE UP ABOUT THIS VERSE, THIS IS HOW THEIR LIVES WILL GO, IN CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER, AND I QUOTE ( ... )

mjaejae July 11 2015, 09:20:11 UTC

omg omg omg i will sound very demanding but i will still say it tho haha! More, more omg!!! But either way, this is is sooooooooo cute! And just 💕💕. The one when Jaejoong was guessing Yunho's fav in dbsk is just the most adorbs thing in the world.

countingcr0ws July 23 2015, 02:07:49 UTC

bless you, but /drops voice to less than a whisper, there's not going to be much of a sequel, because like it's just going to be so happy with zero contention because i'm dumb af and they need to have a vibrator shoved up their asses and sent off to happy land. but i actually vomited an ramble about their future, heh ( ... )