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Fic: One Chance At This (1/1)

May 31, 2011 11:10

Title: One Chance At This
Author: cranberry_pi
Rating: R for themes
Spoilers: Definitely not.
Summary: AU, Future!Fic. Beyond that, I don't want to give away the ending!

A/N: Just a drabble, but it wouldn't get out of my head.

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fic, faberry

Comments 25

nyx29 June 4 2011, 08:27:42 UTC

How do you do this to me in less than 500 words? I find it incredible that you can get so much emotion in there in such a small amount of words. Have I told you that you're full of awesomeness recently, because you are! :) lol.

I thought it was unlikely to be a wedding, but that probably says as much about my angsty thoughts at the moment, as it does yours. That said though, the misdirection was great, and it made me question myself a couple of times.

And... I thought this...
"I mean, I never had a chance to ask her-”
was even more heartbreaking than the heartbreaking ending.

*Goes to find Quinn to give her a hug*

x

cranberry_pi June 6 2011, 19:10:32 UTC

We'll make that word catch on yet! Thanks so much - I actually love writing the short ones like that, I find it easier to really focus on one emotion and play with it. And you're full of awesomeness too, just saying! :)

Yeah, we were both in the same sort of headspace, so I imagine you saw through it a bit easier, but if I made you doubt yourself that's definitely good!

That was actually the last line I wrote - I was really trying to come up with something for her to say, and then it just sort of came out of the blue!

*gives Quinn a hug too*