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Final Words (1/1)

Oct 03, 2011 09:23

Title: Final Words (1/1)
Author: cranberry_pi
Summary: A funeral for a girlfriend - Santana's eulogy.
Pairings: Brittana, implied Faberry
Length: ~2000.
Rating: PG-13 for themes? I think.
Warnings: Character Death
Author's Note: I shouldn't write when I'm in this kind of screwed-up mental state. This is what happens. There's nothing happy in this ( Read more... )

angstalicious, brittana

Comments 5

cdn_torii October 3 2011, 18:19:52 UTC

It was hard to read this through the waterfall of tears that were making its way down my face.. But it was beautiful. Quite the sendoff for Santana to give. I think I started crying from the 3rd line in the whole thing... knowing what was to come. It was beautifully written. And with all the stuff floating around tumblr about these two, its no wonder I pretty much fell apart as I was reading.. (Have you seen that video of Britt's funeral??)

cranberry_pi October 4 2011, 16:58:00 UTC

I'm sorry for making you cry! But I'm glad you liked it - it just seemed like a Santana thing to do, to hold herself together long enough to say what she needed to.

I have seen that, actually! It's part of what made me write this, it was beautiful work by the vid maker.

emma_energy October 7 2011, 06:40:02 UTC

That was just. so sad, and special. I may never be able to listen to that song without thinking about Britt now. I love the way Santana just missed all of Britt and felt so lost without her. :'( also liked the way it ended. with Santana and the memory about the dirt. Loved it, just as I love everything you write.

cranberry_pi October 7 2011, 13:01:53 UTC

Well, I hope I didn't totally ruin the song for you - it's a good song, after all. :) But thank you so much for reading, and for your really lovely words. I always feel weird saying I'm glad something was sad, but I am glad it came across like I wanted it to.

Thank you again. :)

nyx29 October 16 2011, 18:08:17 UTC

I didn't comment on this the first time I read it because I didn't know what to say and I was crying. Now I've read it twice, I'm still not really any closet to knowing what to say, and again, I'm crying! Lol.

Everything you write always cuts through everything and gets straight to my heart. This carries so much emotion and I don't think it was very long at all before the first tear fell. It was beautiful and so real. I think it perfectly captured what I imagine Santana would say and how she'd feel. I can only imagine the pain and grief that a loss like that would provoke, but this felt so real.

Like I said, I don't really know quite what to say, I just... I just thought it was so incredibly sad but very beautifully written and words probably don't quite cut it for describing just what you did to me when I read this. Lol.

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