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Dreaming of Butterflies - A Jacob/Bella Fic - Chapter 14

Feb 10, 2010 22:22

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shadowfox1119 March 11 2010, 07:22:19 UTC

I absolutely LOVE this story. I really like the whole idea that the original series was all a dream in Bella's head. It a very creative way to go about things and, honestly, it makes me more satisfied in the long run. ^_^

“Alright, A: I don’t feel that way about you, Bells."

However, as much as this story has intrigued me, this line disappointed my J/B-shipper heart to no end... *Sighs* Oh, well. I suppose I'll just have to wait and see what happens in the long run. -_-

Again, awesome fic.

stretch March 16 2010, 04:36:56 UTC

Good to hear! It's always nice to get positive feedback ;) As for Bella, Jake, and their awkward dance around each other well...you're just going to have to give them both time to figure out what they're going through. After all, they weren't too good at it the first time around.

Thanks so much for reading ♥

shadowfox1119 March 17 2010, 06:27:20 UTC

I'm glad I could help with my positive imput. ^_^

Yes, I know I need to be patient with Bella and this "Real-World Jake." ...But it does not mean I have to be very happy about it. *Shrugs flippantly* ;P

You're right, though. They both are hardcore rookies at the Love Game. -_-

DoB anonymous March 26 2010, 04:17:31 UTC

Love! love! Love! It just crossed over to fanfic!!! Ur writing is awesome! U bring such depth to the characters! I'm amazed to find someone who sees them the way that I always have!!! Pls give me more!!!!' I know your busy but there's always redbull!!!! (I'm selfish)

denise216 April 30 2010, 04:25:35 UTC

this is a great story I would love to read more. Are you still working on this?

stretch May 3 2010, 04:34:52 UTC

LOL, yes I am still working on this. It's just been put on hold until law school ends for the year. Look for an update on or about the 12th of May when I get free for the summer.

denise216 May 3 2010, 18:06:10 UTC

That is great you are very talented, and congrats on law school ..

sunlitshadow June 13 2010, 16:57:53 UTC

I just read this all the way through for ohhh, the fourth time? And it's still fantastic. I love your Jake and your Charlie and your Quil and Embry, and your Leah, SFM! You have a really great knack for fleshing out the minor characters, taking what little SMeyer handed out about them and making it real.

I saw your comment about being tied up with law school... Hopefully you'll see your way clear and update soon!

inthevast June 28 2010, 05:11:33 UTC

I've been having a Jacob/Bella fic review this evening and I read all of this in go. I'm pretty much addicted. There's cute Bella/Jake, intriguing dreams and a twisty plot. There's moments that made me tear up when Charlie was talking about how everyone had left him except Bella? Oh my god. That was so sad and sweet and made me sniffle quite a bit.

Please tell me you are going to update this soon? I have to know what is going to happen next! I can't wait to see where you are going with this.