The One Left Forgotten (Oneshot)

Jul 23, 2012 02:02


Title:  The One Left Forgotten

Author: creamymint

Pairing: Asami/Akihito

Spoilers: None… I guess?

Summary: Who the fuck are you? That had hurt more than he could ever imagine.

Word Count: 2440

Disclaimer: All familiar characters belong to Yamane Ayano.

Author’s Note: Yes, this is a SEQUEL of “The Forgotten One”, so for those who haven’t read that yet you ( Read more... )

vf: the one left forgotten, vf: the forgotten one

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jaz_laura July 22 2012, 20:50:19 UTC
The story was so beautiful you made me cry bucket of tears so early in the morning....I love it. Love how aki greets asami through the video *cries some more*

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creamymint July 23 2012, 13:20:37 UTC
I was a bit unsure if I should put that scene in because Aki is so daring with his feelings there...but since it kept on bugging me, I took the risk. Glad you liked it :D

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vongolauchiha July 22 2012, 21:12:30 UTC
I'm glad you shared this it had me in tears I loved this story so much! <3 Thank you <3

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creamymint July 23 2012, 13:23:23 UTC
I really thought it was a bad idea writing Asami so desperate and lost... but I guess even he could act based on emotions with someone they cared about. Really glad you liked it <3

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Very lovley moonshadow4 July 22 2012, 22:35:25 UTC
I didn't know Asami is so... sweet and loving. He is adorable, :ducks bullets: charming, I mean charming, :checks to see if any more threats are coming:
;)

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Re: Very lovley creamymint July 23 2012, 13:25:20 UTC
Yes, he is adorable! *gets shot* And I have no regrets dying if it made my readers happy *bleeds to death*

Thank you for reading~ :D

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kurosaki_lys July 22 2012, 23:54:13 UTC
Idiot... you made me cry... I already cried with the other one but this... oh god, this is so touching... so... sweet. you don't suck at writing Asami. I think you did a great job!!

thank you for the more than amazing fic! <3

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creamymint July 23 2012, 13:28:05 UTC
*blush* Your words are too kind! And I'm really, really glad that you liked how Asami behave in this. :D

No, thank you for being an awesome reader~ <3 *hugs*

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syhrain July 23 2012, 00:29:30 UTC
So beautiful. I am almost cried when i read this.
Thank you for such wonderful story (⌒▽⌒)☆

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creamymint July 23 2012, 13:29:13 UTC
Thank you for reading (as always ;D)

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