The One Left Forgotten (Oneshot)

[creamymint]

Title:  The One Left Forgotten

Author: creamymint

Pairing: Asami/Akihito

Spoilers: None… I guess?

Summary: Who the fuck are you? That had hurt more than he could ever imagine.

Word Count: 2440

Disclaimer: All familiar characters belong to Yamane Ayano.

Author’s Note: Yes, this is a SEQUEL of “The Forgotten One”, so for those who haven’t read that yet you

Comments

[radcat38]

No, I think it does deserve the light of day...it was lovely...and wonderful.
I am exhausted from too much work and ill from a sinus infection so while making
tea I started thinking of your first story and wondering if you had written a sequel...and BAM...here it was...my VF psyhic 3rd eye was working again. Cool.
I loved it. Enjoyed seeing these some scenes from Asami-sama's pov and seeing the irony that a man so powerful cannot control everything that is close to his heart.
Loved the loving moments..and that tape of Aki professing his love while celebrating A's birthday..priceless.
Thank you. Wonderful story. Angsty but with a happy VF ending...sigh..happy fan girl sigh...and smiles...

[creamymint]

:O I hope you'll get better soon! My entire family is sick with flu (except for me)... I think the inconsistent weather took a toll on some of us :(

It happens to me too! (sometimes) Especially with eprime's or ptw30's stories. (Wish I could write like them, they're awesome. *cry silently inside*) I guess somehow we have the RSS feed install in our brain! :D

And I'm truly glad you liked it! I was ready to jump of a bridge with a pink tutu (mostly to dodge Asami's bullets) when I post this up XD Thank you for the constant support :)

[creamymint]

As much as I love to, I'm sorry I can't :( Believe me, I suck in writing smex scenes (I do tease, but I don't indulge in a full length of smex). You'll cringe if you read it, seriously XD

But if there's anyone who wants to continue this piece from where it left off and write smex for these two, I'll gladly give my consent. In fact, I'm waiting with a popcorn myself! :D

[dyoklako]

awww. it's not that bad. i actually want to see more of them. what happens after aki-chan left the facility and them renewing their vows, etc.

it's a wonderful companion to the other fic. well done. :)

[creamymint]

If my plot bunnies bugs me again for this piece, I'll gladly continue :D (But really, even if I continue this one... I can't write smex XD)

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading :)

[ickyickypoopoo]

Booohhhhooo that was sad. Poor akihito and Asami ... So glad that it had a happy ending

[creamymint]

I always made you sad... but I'm glad there's rainbow and sunshine for this one at the end XD Thanks for reading~

[souhitsou]

I love it. It's so~.... them.

Aki has a strong heart, maybe even stronger than Asami's, for his decision, for making his declaration and all. I'm so proud of him.

[creamymint]

Somehow along the way... I made it seem like Aki's the one leading Asami by the nose all along :O It happens so naturally... and I think Asami's nature of being so forgiving with Aki leads to this :D