The One Left Forgotten (Oneshot)

Jul 23, 2012 02:02


Title:  The One Left Forgotten

Author: creamymint

Pairing: Asami/Akihito

Spoilers: None… I guess?

Summary: Who the fuck are you? That had hurt more than he could ever imagine.

Word Count: 2440

Disclaimer: All familiar characters belong to Yamane Ayano.

Author’s Note: Yes, this is a SEQUEL of “The Forgotten One”, so for those who haven’t read that yet you ( Read more... )

vf: the one left forgotten, vf: the forgotten one

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yaoirin_89 July 23 2012, 14:42:54 UTC
my eyes got all blurry when i read this and have to wipe it discretely bcoz i dont want my dad see me cry *blush* i'm such a crybaby, but really this story is awasome!

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creamymint July 25 2012, 11:25:54 UTC
Thank you for the kind words! Glad you liked it :D

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ultimatezero July 23 2012, 16:11:34 UTC
So sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet... I'm getting diabetes from this fic XD
Great story and closure, thank you for the story ^0^

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creamymint July 25 2012, 11:26:35 UTC
Really glad that you enjoy this piece :D Thanks for reading!

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ameris57 July 23 2012, 20:25:51 UTC
It was really interesting. Sad but great. And it ended well after all. Thanks for the writing. See forward to your next one. Big kisses and hugs.

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creamymint July 25 2012, 11:28:00 UTC
I'm glad that it turned out ok too... because I did have an alternate ending, which I don't think I wanna write XD Thanks for reading~

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spiritphoenix92 July 23 2012, 21:11:27 UTC
This is sooo amazing and beautiful. Thank you for sharing. I can't wait for your other updates. <3

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creamymint July 25 2012, 11:29:56 UTC
Really glad that you like this :D Was thinking that Asami was too OOC XD Thanks for reading!

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Double awsomeness redkitty1 August 2 2012, 07:32:05 UTC
Brilliant. This was even more poignant than Aki's version of events. I loved the video message part. ~Aki is so loving and thoughtful. He knew Asami would need that. I believe Aki's the stronger of the two of them emotionally.

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