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Feb 13, 2012 07:50

We were spinning wishes in the phases of the moon that night when our burdens dissolved into a pool of liquid mica. You said divine rebellion is in the air and the darkness is ripe with receptivity ( Read more... )

creative writing, lj-idol

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karmasoup February 15 2012, 22:40:17 UTC
Poetry and art. Love.

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createdestiny February 16 2012, 01:08:04 UTC
Thank you. :)

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snarkerdoodle February 15 2012, 23:26:53 UTC
Really enjoyed the flow and feel of this. Ending with the more concrete description was a great contrast and ending to the the rest of the piece. Lovely!

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createdestiny February 16 2012, 01:08:19 UTC
Thank you so much. :)

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basric February 16 2012, 01:25:56 UTC
Well done.

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createdestiny February 17 2012, 01:45:04 UTC
Thanks for reading me. :)

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nodressrehersal February 16 2012, 02:49:35 UTC
Beautiful, beautiful images, words, language...

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createdestiny February 16 2012, 05:42:55 UTC
Thank you, my friend. :)

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whipchick February 16 2012, 14:17:10 UTC
What amazing images - this is a lovely prose poem. I especially loved "Christ is a prism," and "in the morning, my soul unfolded in concentric circles."

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createdestiny February 17 2012, 01:47:30 UTC
Thank you. I haven't set out to write prose poems....I think I'm just playing with word paint.

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