Comments | creekstersheart: Contract of the Soul

creekstersheart

Contract of the Soul

Aug 05, 2005 17:20

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Comments 11

robbabubbles August 5 2005, 18:54:38 UTC

Beautiful.

creekstersheart August 5 2005, 19:30:06 UTC

Thank you! :)

anonymous August 6 2005, 10:26:12 UTC

wow that was really great.
I love the title...very original.
And that opening line is just amazing...
I love the way this poem is written. It's short and simple, yet the words are chosen carefully.
Good job ;)

-Marinz

anonymous August 6 2005, 10:26:48 UTC

this is a great poem. thanks for sharing.

-word_lover

anonymous August 6 2005, 10:27:15 UTC

as always,

i can feel you.. your writing..
your talent is endless..
i love when you post..
~raychel~

anonymous August 7 2005, 01:54:24 UTC

I really enjoyed this peom and the title tied it all togather.

centello