hp fic // i built this kingdom up from nothing [remus/sirius, pg-13]

[crooked]

title: I built this kingdom up from nothing
author: crooked
pairing: Remus/Sirius
rating: PG-13
word count: 2730
summary: Living on his own has one benefit Sirius didn't expect.
disclaimer: Not mine.
a/n: written for round two of the rs_games. big thanks and ♥ to my lovely beta, such_heights!

Comments

[nellie_darlin]

:D

Luvvit, sweets. Sirius's state of mind is perfectly realised, and you balance the introspection with the action so well. V naice!

[crooked]

thank you, darling!! i'm so glad you liked this one ♥

[mysecretashes]

I love it. :) Sirius's feelings on having his own place were very realistic. I love his little slip up on calling Remus his boyfriend, and his surprise at how fast Remus was moving. :D Very nice.

[crooked]

thank you! i'm really happy that Sirius' feelings came across as realistic to you. i was hoping it worked for other people the way it did in my crazy brain. ;P

♥

[roterhimmel]

Ahhh that was so wonderful! The whole scenery is really believable and Sirius' saying boyfriend thought they haven't talked about this yet was just so lovely! And I also loved Sirius' thoughts and reflections on living alone now, but what made me cringe was Sirius being unable to sleep without James by his side or when his friends left and went home. It's so sad... despite Sirius claiming he's fine, nothing will probably ever replace the feelings his family should've given him. Sigh.

Otherwise, a very lovely fiction! And love forward!Remus <3

[crooked]

thanks for such a lovely comment! <3 i really had hoped the scenario would work, so i'm thrilled to hear that! and yeah it made me sad to stick those little bits of angst in there for poor Sirius, but i tried to give him a happier ending with Remus there.

well, Remus and the doilies. ;D thanks again! ♥

[roterhimmel]

oh well i forgot to ask if i could rec this? i'm listing up all my fav fics currently and i haven't posted the reclist yet but i'd love to see this fiction on there! pretty please?

[crooked]

sorry it took a few days to get back to you! i've been a bit busy. and yes you can definitely list this on your recslist! thanks for wanting to include this ♥

[crooked]

haha oh, the doilies! such tortured little lace souls. XD thanks so much! i'm so glad you enjoyed this <3

[sensiblemaniac]

<3

I really can't think of anything else to say. haha.

[crooked]

hee thanks, love! ♥

that's more than enough, bb!