The Truth Hurts Part 2

May 31, 2011 08:52


The Truth Hurts Part 2

Disclaimer: I still don't own

1983

The yellow cab pulled up to the airport and dropped the young father by the front door, glad that it wasn’t him that had to deal with the two small boys.  The younger cried nonstop and the older one just glared at everyone as if he was mad at the world.  The only time he would speak was ( Read more... )

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jennytork May 31 2011, 12:35:38 UTC
I REALLY enjoyed this!

I loved this so much!!!poor wee!Dean....

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crowley_gal May 31 2011, 12:38:45 UTC
Thank you for your comment, and that you enjoyed the story. I wanted to try something different as to why Dean didn't like to fly.

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borgmama1of5 May 31 2011, 13:29:24 UTC
Nasty double whammy!

I liked how Sam was trying to be careful of Dean's feelings, and I loved Dean's answer that he doesn't think he's dangerous, he knows.

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crowley_gal May 31 2011, 13:40:09 UTC
Thanks for your reply. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It's really sad that Dean, who has this beautiful soul thinks he's good for nothing more than killing.

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The Truth Hurts Parts 1 & 2 taylorariel May 31 2011, 13:42:00 UTC
I really enjoyed this. Like the premise and the flashbacks and the way Bobby came in at just the right time. A very good job. Hope you post another story soon.
Thank You.

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Re: The Truth Hurts Parts 1 & 2 crowley_gal May 31 2011, 13:43:58 UTC
Thank you for taking the time to reply. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.

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jasmineisland May 31 2011, 14:34:37 UTC
Awwww. Poor Dean. Good for Bobby, coming to the rescue.
I'd actually like to see more of this- why Dean opens up to Bobby and not Sam. And what happened to the crystal ball???

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crowley_gal May 31 2011, 14:41:13 UTC
Thank you for taking the time to comment.

I think the reason why Dean would open up to Bobby is mostly because he isn't Sam or John. He's more likely to have a neutral position on things. That's my take on it.

As to what happened the the crystal ball, I have no idea, honestly. I was just looking for a light way to end things. I might be able to think of something, but no promises.

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greeneyes_fan May 31 2011, 18:42:02 UTC
Oh, DEAN. Poor lost little creature.

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crowley_gal May 31 2011, 19:03:29 UTC
Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

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