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crushtor

The Discovery of the Self Project

Nov 20, 2006 14:16

The Discovery of the Self Project

Phase I: Surrounded By Ignorance
Phase II: Transition Phase Alpha (Enlightenment by Darkness)
Phase III: Descending Despair's Chasm
Phase IV: Transition Phase Beta (Climbing the Slippery Walls of Detatchment)
Phase V: Lost To Apathy
Phase VI: Transition Phase Gamma (Preparation for the Cortex Reboot)
Phase VII: Seeking ( Read more... )

creative writing, completion

Comments 6

anonymous July 29 2005, 14:55:06 UTC

Either I suck at critiquing, or these are all powerful and moving accounts of the human condition (translated: i sound like an arts wanker, but you don't and that's the main thing).

I especially like Phase X, the rythym of the listing itself seems to fit the pace of the subject matter.

More mundanely, you may want to check your html for the top few. Think you might be missing an /a or a >, as it was (at least initally) coming up as a single link.

crushtor July 31 2005, 04:05:15 UTC

Thank you Mystery Commenter. If I ever sounded like an arts wanker, I would shoot myself. And the HTML has been corrected. Thank you again!

raenima February 23 2006, 13:17:45 UTC

seems like your talkin to yourself there tomo... ;)

raenima February 23 2006, 13:28:07 UTC

your so gonna write a book like that one "too soon old, too late smart" by gordon Livingston... but your head... not his....

tomusan February 26 2006, 12:38:14 UTC

Why the hell not? It's going to be called "I'm a grumpy old man living in an angsty teenager's body", dedicated to Ms. Smelly.

raenima February 26 2006, 13:33:23 UTC

awesome.... and ur dad can bring out a book called "why i injected my child with grumpy old man syndrom" there can be a chapter all about how all children injected with this turned out to be hyper sensative to smells...