Comments | cryogenia: [Fic] "At the Very Ports We Blow" (Premovie, 4/5)

cryogenia

[Fic] "At the Very Ports We Blow" (Premovie, 4/5)

Jul 24, 2007 05:34

Title: At the very ports we blow (Part 4 of 5)
Author: cryogenia
Pairing: None (gen)
Rating: R (rating has increased)
Prompt: For 7stages, set 3, #4: "draw a line in the sand"
Spoiler level: Post-series, pre-movie
Warnings for this fic: References to ethnic tensions, both fictional and historical

A/N: Huge chapter is huuuuge D: One more to go (I hope)! (And ( Read more... )

fma, r, fanfic, hyde, fic, atvpwb, heied, gen

Comments 64

anomiagrey September 30 2007, 10:18:48 UTC

I love...everything. The ethnic tensions you've surprised. The character building. The way you got into Ed's head. The scientifical info(the reason I will never be able to wirte good post/pre movie fanfics), the world...it's like a birthday cake(sorry for the horrible simile, just trying hard to capture all the fluff it's unleashed in me) I can't wait to find out how heiderich will react to Ed, whether his difficult personality, ego and his misinterpretation of ed's gestures are the only reasons he bears a grudge for ed, and whether ed will tell Alphons about his resemblence to his brother... when will part 5 come out? i can't wait!

cryogenia September 30 2007, 17:13:03 UTC

<3 Thank you so much for your kind words...I am working on Part 5 right now and hopefully will have it out in the next few days. (Then I get to work on the sequel of forever, hooray!)

dreamer_067 October 5 2007, 04:56:56 UTC

Wow... I apologize for my lack of vocabulary and how sucky this comment is but wow.. This is totally love. I love the dialogue (definitely whenever Edward and Alfons argued). I love the realistic problems in this fic. I love the detail and scenery. I love all your major characters. They are imperfect, so human, and lively. God, I love your Jean (and Edward, Alfons, Hohenheim, Dorochette, etc....). I had an urge to punch Alfons in the first chapter and Edward at times. I really enjoyed looking at Edward's perspective and how new he is to this different world and how he realized his faults later on.

Love, love, love ♥♥♥

cryogenia October 5 2007, 06:34:06 UTC

<3 Thanks so much for your kind words - it helps a lot as I am now finishing up the last part :)

dreamer1789 November 10 2007, 15:41:48 UTC

Damned close to perfection! ♥ There was nothing not to like! XD

cryogenia November 10 2007, 20:50:25 UTC

Thanks - glad you liked it :)

anat_astarte December 23 2007, 08:15:41 UTC

Wonderful fic!! :D

cryogenia December 23 2007, 17:05:35 UTC

Thank you so much! (And ehehe, thanks for commenting here so I can be reminded to put a link to ch5 from ch4 XD; )

anat_astarte December 23 2007, 17:13:36 UTC

Hehehehee! Glad to be of help! :D

xilverose June 2 2008, 15:07:56 UTC

By reading this awesome fic, it's like there could be an alter!Jean/Ed pairing! ^^

cryogenia June 2 2008, 23:03:50 UTC

Hee, I'm glad you like it! And what is that wonderful icon you have, btw?

xilverose June 8 2008, 04:53:40 UTC

He's Yuber from a game called Suikoden 3. Made it myself just to fill in the blank. It's pretty fun to watch your icon too. I don't think I'll ever get over it! ^^" Oh and I've finished reading that fic! I guess I forgot to give my comment. It's great that they have resolve their disputes and I guess the moral of the story is........don't be an ingrate like Ed! ^^...If I'm not mistaken....