Wow, just... wow. I've always wanted to see if anyone would do something like this, all because of a line in the movie (Winry talking to Sieg I think) mentioning how Al has dreams where he's older and still with his brother. I don't think either Al or Alfons' souls are terribly strongly anchored.....
I pointed that line out to someone who I thought was totally more observant and into the series than me (somehow), only to find out that it was overlooked by MANY, or quickly forgotten (or both), when it was one of the few points of the movie that made me go "hey, that's a pretty neat concept..." (and kinda ties back to the ZEPPELIN'D days of Ed popping into that alter!Ed breifly.) Most of the rest of the movie's ways of going about stuff had me going "WTF? Is this still FMA?"
<3 I'm glad you're interested...the concept for this was originally my livewife's, so I have to give credit where credit is due on that one. We'd both been talking about that one line in the movie where it mentions that Al is having dreams of seeing through Alfons's eyes, and somehow this AT is what popped out :) And I'm glad you like Kessler - he's going to be showing up again, so it's good to hear he makes any kind of sense to the readers XD;
Thank you for commenting! Your reviews always brighten my day :)
Lovely! The description of Kessler was particularly vivid.
I'm intrigued by what has happened to Edward. And I'm really hooked by the way Alfons and Al seem to be mindlinking. I hope you are planning more of this.
I'm glad you like the mindlinking...it's going to be coming up a lot, that's the main concept I'm writing with, so XD; As for what's happened to Ed...this verse is meant to fit into one of Mikke's, so er, things don't bode well for Our Heroes... XD
Beautiful. As usual. How do you do it, woman? *sigh*
Love the retelling of Alfons and Edward's little episode on the stairs... It was more vivid than seeing the real thing. Oh, and this line hit me particularly hard:
His stomach twisted a bit and he paused, suddenly nervous. He wondered, not for the first time, if Edward had seen fit to forgive him yet.
Super excited about more Cryo!fic, and I can't wait to see where it's going <3
<3 Hooray, I am loved even after I die! I can thumb my nose at Alfons then :F
Also, I'm glad you liked the rehashing of that canon plot point...weirdly enough, that scene was what made me fall in love with HeiEd, Hei bitchslapping Ed XD; I guess I like my OTPs rough?
You already know I love this (I hope) but I just wanted to mention again how much I love your style and pacing. You put so much detail into each scene, so much real feeling, that everything you write just comes to life. I get caught up in the story and I'm sorry when it ends, and I'm just holding my breath to read the future chapters.
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I eagerly await more of this. =D
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Thank you for commenting! Your reviews always brighten my day :)
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I'm intrigued by what has happened to Edward. And I'm really hooked by the way Alfons and Al seem to be mindlinking. I hope you are planning more of this.
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Love the retelling of Alfons and Edward's little episode on the stairs... It was more vivid than seeing the real thing. Oh, and this line hit me particularly hard:
His stomach twisted a bit and he paused, suddenly nervous. He wondered, not for the first time, if Edward had seen fit to forgive him yet.
Super excited about more Cryo!fic, and I can't wait to see where it's going <3
PS Ghost!Cryo or no, I know I still love you XD
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Also, I'm glad you liked the rehashing of that canon plot point...weirdly enough, that scene was what made me fall in love with HeiEd, Hei bitchslapping Ed XD; I guess I like my OTPs rough?
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I could go for that. XD
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