[fic] "Forward the Machine" (Action/Adventure, AU diverging from midCoS)

[cryogenia]

Hey guys

Comments

[dreamer1789]

Most intriguing! ^^

I don't know how you do it, but I like your Alfons better than the movie on - perhaps because yours has so much more depth character-wise.

As usual, I adore your style, so I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

[cryogenia]

<3333 This is the highest compliment a writer can get, thank you so much ;-;

[cryogenia]

Awww, I think you do a perfectly good job of commenting - I appreciate knowing that you enjoyed this :)

[firebird308]

I've read the other fic I saw mentioned in the other comments, so yeah, know the universe already. ^_^ (...Considering what was going on in that thing, that's so the wrong face to use. O_o Oh well.)

I actually found this last night, but since I had been about to go to bed at the time... ^_^; Anyway, yay for new ficcage!

[cryogenia]

Thank you for the kind comment :)

[crazyloststar]

i feel so horrible that it took me so long to read this! i've had it bookmarked since you posted it, and finally got to read it on the train today. \o/

i really like how you have introduced this idea of al and alfons sharing their souls in some way.and the ending really leaves me curious as to how much is being shared now that one side is getting weaker by the day, and if that affects things somehow. i am intrigued!! :D

and i also want to know where ed is!! *flail* i cant imagine that things are going too well for him out and about on his own during this time. ><

[cryogenia]

Aww, thanks so much for the comment -- and you're reading my mind on certain details >.>

[bob_fish]

Been hearing about this and meaning to read it for a while, and here I am, procrastinating from proper work by reading Chapter One - and it just blew me away

[cryogenia]

Thank you so much!! I can't express how much this review made my day ;-; I have some health issues that can make it hard to write, but this gives me the encouragement I need to push on. (That and inadvertently you just fixed my writer's block XD Having perspective will do that.)

Thank you.

[bob_fish]

Glad it brightened your day and encouraged you - your stuff is awesome and you deserve to feel encouraged! XD I'm very looking forward to digging into future chapters of Forward the Machine.

Oh yeah, and I just discovered from enemytosleep that we're collaborators in not-so-anonymous threesome smut! How cool is that? That running gag with the pillowbooks was win, kudos.

[cryogenia]

Yeah, that is awesome XD I loved seeing how we all played off each other. Sky I spotted right away, I would know her Roy anywhere, but you guys were a mystery :)