Didn't Plan It This Way

[crystalfic]

Title: Didn't Plan It This Way
Author: crystalshard
Pairing: Kevin/Alan
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: The occasional swearword. Otherwise, see the rating.
Disclaimer: I do not own Tron, Tron: Legacy or anything associated with the franchise, save for a copy of the original film on DVD. It belongs to Disney. No money is being made from this story.
Summary:

Comments

[blue_crow]

Let's see. How many things am I totally head-over-heels about in this? Flynn's point of view was totally the right choice- I love his discovery of Alan's feelings, of him trying to be the sensible one as Alan seduces him. I love how Flynn sort of starts off wanting to help him and then gradually can't keep away.

The hint that Alan has done this before, the question of how that affects the breakup with Lora... it was all just incredible.

Oh, and the sex was really, really hot. I was blushing and I'm pretty jaded, it takes a lot to get that reaction out of me.

[crystalshard]

Oh my User, thank you so much for giving such an in-depth coment. I'm so happy you liked it.

It was always Flynn's POV - I didn't even think about it, that was just the way that the story landed in my brain. After that, I just let the two of them go and wrote down what happened. I didn't realise that Alan had done it before until I actually got to that part of the fic.

I'm really glad that you liked the sex scene - I don't have much practice with them, so knowing that it works for you is great.

[mulder200]

Mm. Now that was delightful and hot!

[crystalshard]

Thank you!

[aeon_entwined]

The emotional pitches through this entire thing are fabulous. I feel like I'm actually there with both of them.

The characterizations are perfect, and even though it's rough and a little messy, the sex is almost painfully intimate. I feel like I'm intruding on something really private.

Wonderful, wonderful job, darling.

♥

[crystalshard]

Thank you for commenting twice! I'm really pleased that they're coming across as being in character, because that's what I was trying to go for. As for the sex, I wanted to make it as real as I could, so I'm very happy that the intimacy came through clearly.

Thank you so much.

[pet_lunatic]

I agree with aeon_intertwined - love the emotional rawness here, and the depth of intimacy underlying the urgency of the sex. And the sex was very, very hot. :)

Fantastic!

[pet_lunatic]

Bugger - sorry, aeon_entwined. Synonym brainfart there! ;)

[crystalshard]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[pet_lunatic]

You're welcome! I enjoyed it so much my brain lost the ability to get people's usernames right ;)

[marchwarden23]

This was a lovely, sweet little story. I like how the relationship between them became something more than just a rebound at the end. Emotional attachment + hot sexin' = YAY! The characterisations were spot on, and I loved the dialogue. Thank you for sharing this! <3

[crystalshard]

Thank you for such a lovely comment!

I like hinting at emotions without being blatant about it, so I'm glad that worked well for you. And I'm really pleased that they're both reading as being in character.