An Untitled Short Story - By: Me

[cure4temptation]

She slowly pulled away and wiped the black tears from her eyes. In her rear-view mirror she could see him storm inside. Before the heave oak door could close behind him, he was already kneeled over in an emotional wreck. She stopped at the sign around the corner, cleared the make-up streaming down her face, and re-did the liner. After she was again

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[cure4temptation]

Please feel free to reply with anything you see to improve it. I did everything for a reason, so I may just defend my reasoning. But if people fail to see my reasoning, it's not very good reasoning. So I am open to any suggestions, and any ideas for titles as well.

-Keith

[one_side_zero]

omg... sad!! i think its good!! it's really sad...

♥i hope things get better.

[youkillmewell_]

awesome ending line.

[unfaithful_eyes]

isn't it, though?!

[unfaithful_eyes]

omg! you're famous in my lj!!!

♥

[youkillmewell_]

buh..?