que tengo miedo perderte

[curvasud]

Title: Que tengo miedo perderte
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Steven Gerrard/Xabi Alonso
Disclaimer: Fiction.
Summary: “Don’t tempt me. I can't afford that pleasure.”

Comments

[parallelkites]

First! =D

ok. a proper comment now. not that anything i do is proper.

[parallelkites]

Oh Vy, you break me so effortlessly. *leaps*

Stevie groans. “It’s just...I can’t talk if you look at me. (Or if I can see it, I guess.)”

Absolutely...well. There are no words in this god forsaken language, I believe.

And,

“Don’t make it so easy,” Stevie pleads breathlessly and Xabi hears a distinct desperation in his voice, “don’t make it so hard.”

“Don’t kiss me, then.”

*groans* This. Is poetry in motion. Seeing such a strong man so desperate for another, so desperate for Xabi. Definitely one of my most adored getting-together fics. Ever. Going in memories with the rest of your work. As always. ♥

i'll run far away after i've said this.

[parallelkites]

lets his fingers rest there, where it’s deliciously warm and he can feel a quickening pulse under their skins.

your imagery. every single time. every single time. ♥

Re: i'll run far away after i've said this.

[curvasud]

You make me blush, Naz; really, too flattering. Thank you!

[bergusia]

Oh my, this is utterly beautiful. *le sigh*

[curvasud]

Aww, thanks!

[nis_roma]

Just lovely <3

[curvasud]

Thanks. =)

[elynaz_sgxa]

This is so beautiful! Killed me. *mems*

[curvasud]

Eek, thank you!

[eternitybreaks]

“don’t make it so hard.”

Can I take that in both ways? Please? I live in the gutter.

Very beautiful and a little haunting and desperate. Nice work.

[curvasud]

Of course! Double entendres for the win. =)

Thank you!