Squee! Chapter four!

Feb 27, 2006 22:22

Ok, now this chapter was really fun to write! And don't worry, it's about to go to an R rating. ^^

Title: Springtime
Rating: PG-13 (But it'll get dirtier soon)
Summary: The race for Naruto's virginity continues...
Disclaimer: Naruto and all other characters© Masashi Kishimoto - I can’t make this stuff up!

Chapter One

Chapter Two

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anonymous February 28 2006, 19:53:15 UTC
OOOOOOOOoooooohhhhhh PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE have a GIANT FIGHT!!!! Make the fox come out G! Think of how intense everything would have to be at that point!!!!!! ^_^

-Captain Skill-

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cutiekittyg March 1 2006, 01:33:55 UTC
You're a dork.

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kakashi_morph February 28 2006, 21:39:24 UTC
I love how naive Naruto is.
And Hinata would probably wait up for Sakura to stop playing around with Ino in the dirt.
And Gai-sensei was funny as well. ^_^ But I can't wait to see what will really happen with the little virgin blond.
So many possibilities, so little time! ( Oh, that's actually quote from Final Fantasy X-2, I didn't really think about it *_*)
And something just tells me he won't be virgin anymore by the end of this fic. Write more! ^_^

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cutiekittyg March 1 2006, 01:35:06 UTC
Mmmm... FFX2. Yummy.

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kakashi_morph March 1 2006, 15:52:58 UTC
It is yummy, however I'd prefer FF VIII because of so-sexy-it-hurts Squall. Sometimes life is not fair.
Anyway, please write more and soon, it is a very funny fic with a very original plotline. <3
PS. And I SO love your icon.

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cutiekittyg March 2 2006, 01:23:10 UTC
No, no, Cloud is so sexy it hurts. ^^ I didn't like FF 8 that much. I have loved 6 since I was like... ten (I'm twenty-one) and I love 7 and 9 and 10-2. ^^ All great fun.

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bloodnblack March 1 2006, 00:32:12 UTC
You know what would be really ironic...if Naruto wasn't a virgin xDD

This is very funny shit, I always wondered what exactly The Springtime of Youth was. I mean I understood Springtime...but Springtime of Youth is a whole different concept. I now understand said concept.

Naruto is so blatantly naive it's cute! I never really thought of an 18 years old being niave as cute before, but it is!

"Lets battle, Uzumaki Naruto."

Battle indeed.

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cutiekittyg March 1 2006, 01:36:14 UTC
Hehehe, thank you! I really appreciate you're comment! ^^ Makes me feel better after a long day at icky work.

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cutiekittyg March 1 2006, 01:36:43 UTC
YOUR comment not you're comment.

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makaikitty March 1 2006, 01:43:22 UTC
Poor Shino, Naruto didn't like his bugs. *shudders* I say Shikamaru gets Naruto in the end. It'll be like the turtle and the hair... slow and steady wins the race. I can't wait to see what you come up with next ^-^

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cutiekittyg March 1 2006, 04:39:49 UTC
Lol! ^^ I love seeing your comments. They make me happy. ^^

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soraetowa_ru March 1 2006, 06:06:34 UTC
sueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! i hope shikamaru gets to naruto, theres not enogh of em. awsome job, write more soon!

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cutiekittyg March 1 2006, 13:29:30 UTC
Hehehe, thanks!

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