Comments | cyclogenesis: gsf = otp?

cyclogenesis

gsf = otp?

Feb 07, 2007 01:05

Happy Wednesday! Here's more fic.

( That's What He Said. Ryan/Brendon/Spencer/Jon. NC-17. 2/3. )

my fic

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d_copper February 7 2007, 09:20:20 UTC

Yay! New part! *rushes off to read*

Made my day.

d_copper February 7 2007, 11:20:09 UTC

Reading the first two paragraphs I thought I missed a chapter because suddenly there was the goody! Spencer and Ryan having sex (and appreciably a lot of sex XD).

I love every single bit of this and I can't wait to read the story as a whole. Seriously, P!atd is the best fandom. GSF is truely the OTP here.

cyclogenesis February 8 2007, 05:54:57 UTC

Eek, hopefully it works better as one story? I worried about the transitions things, since it was written as a one-shot...

Glad you liked it, anyway!

callsigns February 7 2007, 09:40:23 UTC

The William bits leave me breathlessly delighted, as does this:

"Ry," Spencer whispered, fumbling for Ryan's hand, linking their fingers together and squeezing.

I don't know how you make things so sweet when they're so fucking hot, but I'm really glad you're so good at it.

Also,

but then he thought about how easily he bruised, and had horrific fantasies of the needle striking bone, cursive through to the marrow, and he loved Pete's words, but maybe not that much.

I only comment again on this part because it's so, so descriptively good.

But really, Ryan and Spencer's dynamic is so fantastic. It's so warm and comfortable, but really edgy and hot too, and it's just so nice to read. The bracing them up image, god, I love that.

AND THEN THE RIMMING AND THE RIDING. So pretty much ♥

"You're fucking dirty," Brendon told him, like he couldn't quit believe it, like he wasn't quite surprised.

"You fucking like it," Ryan said, breathless.

*helpless* I really like your stories.

cyclogenesis February 8 2007, 06:42:58 UTC

Writing this fic made me love Ryan and Spencer so much, so I'm glad that came through.

(Anytime I write rimming in anything it's probably traceable to your evil influence, truly.)

I really like you! \o/ *hugs*

bunnymuffin41 February 7 2007, 09:55:25 UTC

Okay....I'm gonna need a cold shower now.....I look forward to the next part.

cyclogenesis February 8 2007, 17:50:56 UTC

Ha. Next part soon.

beccaforever February 7 2007, 09:57:55 UTC

I think I will go and have a cold shower now.

Fuck. That was HOT.

I'm glad I read this instead of going to bed (who needs sleep, anyway?).

Guh.

I am so looking foward to the next part.

cyclogenesis February 8 2007, 17:52:24 UTC

Haha yeah, this story has kept me up at night, too. Thanks for the feedback. :)

beccaforever February 9 2007, 03:30:10 UTC

You're welcome.

Also.

I went back and reread it again (once my brain calmed down), and now I have actual feedback (well, closer to actual feedback than "Guh. That was hot").

I really love how these aren't just porn. I mean, porn is good, but I really like seeing all the interactions, and the character development and stuff.

And I had a whole lot more to say and elaborate on, but I forgot. If I remember I'll come back. But that was the general idea.

Also, you are awesome.

fleener February 7 2007, 10:05:00 UTC

Well, fuck. I just...yeah. You have no idea how many times I checked to see if you updated today, it's seriously an embarassing amount, but I don't care, especially right now, because FUCK. I love you. I'd give a detailed account of what I loved in particular, but I have to go to bed. I finished doing all my other shit and then I was like "Okay. I'll check ONE MORE TIME even though I know she probably didn't post it." But you DID. And christ, am I glad I checked that last time. So now...sleep. But later, if I can get my brain working, you shall have better feedback.

cyclogenesis February 8 2007, 17:53:22 UTC

Hee, you are cute. I'm really glad you're liking this.