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cyclogenesis

instead of doing something important like saving the world

Feb 09, 2007 13:04

Final part as promised. I hope everyone's enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it. :)

( That's What He Said. Ryan/Brendon/Spencer/Jon. NC-17. 3/3. )

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musicsexual February 9 2007, 22:02:21 UTC

Eee, so excited it's up. This has been wonderful so far, can't wait to read.

I am, apparently, incapable of using pronouns. musicsexual February 10 2007, 01:40:32 UTC

That was amazing, really. And hot. Nngh, so hot.

I love how your GSF's all have plot progression leading up to the group!sex, so when it finally happens, it's a natural result of all the events before it. It makes the fic more of a story, as opposed to just straight-out porn, which I like.

Brendon making Wizard of Oz references in bed? YES, PLZ.

Also, comeshots. Comeshots on Ryan. And Jon bottoming for Brendon. And sweet Spencer/Ryan. What more could anyone possibly ask for, fic-wise?

callsigns February 9 2007, 22:13:45 UTC

Jesus.

"I did, I liked it," Ryan whispered, reaching blindly for Brendon and dragging him close by his shirt. When he felt Brendon's hand on the back of his neck, he raised his head and kissed him softly. Brendon wound his fingers through Ryan's hair and held him close, sweet pressure against his lips until Ryan opened, and when Spencer knuckled at his hip, moving inward to touch him, Ryan moaned.

I've run out of hyperbolic, flailing adjectives to describe how much I like this story and the way you craft not only the sex but their relationships and individual characters, but this paragraph more than any other in this section made me wibble. The way you couch Ryan in neediness and love is just really spectacularly nice. *happy sigh* Praise, praise, endless praise!

callsigns February 9 2007, 22:43:12 UTC

Also, you know, if you ever felt inspired to tackle an outtake where they all decide to give Bill the best night of his life, I'm fairly sure I have an extra soul kicking around inside me you could have.

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callsigns February 10 2007, 06:12:55 UTC

It's Brendon, Jon and Ryan, when they did . . . hmm, I forget what festival it was in the UK. It was June 06, Leeds, I think? FOB was playing the festival too, which is why you'll see them in some of the pics from this set, all of which are at panicatthedisco.com

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deliberatehips February 9 2007, 22:35:17 UTC

The ending makes me smile so big. The whole thing, actuallly. And now I plan to read it straight through from the start and take notes so I can tell you exactly how brilliant you are. :D

lovelyloveleave February 9 2007, 22:42:24 UTC

I can't believe its over.
I think I can die now
I don't really have any feedback to give besides some high pitched sqeeing noises, so you know, nothing useful or coherent.

favorite lines. thank you for this. oneko_briar February 9 2007, 22:45:21 UTC

"Oh my god, I thought I'd dreamed it," Brendon gasped. He stared at Ryan and Spencer, then over his shoulder at Jon, and fluttered his eyelashes. "And you were there, and you were there..."