Fic: Fevered (One Direction, Niall/Zayn + OT5, Explicit, 7k)

[cyclogenesis]

Here is a story! Listen I know I keep saying that but it's because I keep writing stories, that's why. You're going to have to live with that. This one was helped along by the noble efforts of lookingatstars, who rolled with me line by line through the first third of it, Kiersten and Shanicka who kindly looked it over at four o'clock in the morning lol my life,

Comments

[teaatsix]

Oh wow this was amazing and oh so hot, whilst making me cackle out loud on several occasional (“Helpful stuff,” Harry says in the fond tone of a man remembering the very brightest days and Niall’s not particularly surprised when he looks over and sees that Harry and Louis have managed to coordinate their orgasms in another grand show of the creepy sexiness/sexy creepiness that is their relationshipI loved the teasing beginning of their relationship, literally was imagined all those photos of Niall sweating on stage during that show and slowly deciding this is my new personal head canon, because holy fuck this definitely happened during/after the show. I loved how Niall continuously tried to interact with the other boys but Zayn was so persistent love the way they didn't really question being in front of the others, because it all just flowed so naturally between them

[theviolonist]

I can't read rn but just, YES. My day just got so much better.

[cherrybina]

So, I totally made a terribly embarrassing squeaking sound when I saw new fic from you on my flist jsyk. I love Zayn and Niall together (okay lbr I love all of them in every possible combination because they are adorable and I am easy like that) and this is just delightful. Sweet and hilarious and SO HOT OMG ♥

[badjujuboo]

ALL THE AWARDS FOR THE HOTTEST DRESSING ROOM FUCK EVER!

“Just so everyone knows,” Harry says, “if they get naked, I am going to jerk off.”

“I’ll help,” says Louis.

To this discussion Liam contributes a sort of broken whimpering noise.

laughter, feelings, ust and hot hot HOT PORN!

[shrdmdnssftw]

I WAS GOING TO GO TO SLEEP THEN I SAW THAT YOU POSTED THIS.

And I don't know if you could tell or not, but I kind of adore everything you write, so reading this was just the perfect way to end my day.

Ugh your Zayn and Niall coming together because of the heat, and the OT5 that you slipped in there, those are absolute perfect. And how hot all of this was (esp. Liam trying to hold off but then giving in anyway). I swear, I pretty much reread your other 1D fics so often, and I think this one is joining those ranks.

(In summary, I love this and your writing in general)