eh...
just a short story of mine... i like it... but there's no telling if it's any good or not... feedback is always appreciated.
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2265280/1/ enjoy!
oh, if you ever get bored and want to read some really odd, and bad, poetry... you can go to
http://www.fictionpress.com/~invisiblemosmurf as always, please review!