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knotted_rose November 14 2010, 00:17:31 UTC
This was excellent! Such good banter. And the emotional play-by-play was right on. Plus, good hot sex. Thanks so much for sharing!

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cynthia_arrow November 14 2010, 18:26:34 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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zelda_zee November 15 2010, 03:32:31 UTC
Nicely done! I really love the way you wrote that hug, the way it turned into something more - it was done just exactly right. I'm so glad you wrote H50 fic!

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cynthia_arrow November 16 2010, 06:54:11 UTC
I was worried that the hug didn't come out very well, so that's good to hear! Thanks, dear. ♥

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ellel November 23 2010, 18:52:26 UTC
I'm late and all,but just wanted to let you know that I LOVED the fic!These two are hot together and so much fun:)

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cynthia_arrow November 24 2010, 07:56:11 UTC
Thanks, darling! :D

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liketheroad January 8 2011, 15:38:14 UTC
Awesome!

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nova33 January 8 2011, 23:59:02 UTC
This is really, really fantastic! I think you've got their dynamic down perfectly, and I especially love that there's a place for their banter even in a more serious sitaution; I think it just highlights the way they balance each other out really well. I also like how it happened - that it's a comforting hug that kind of gets away from Steve a little, because I kind of like that he just can't help himself. I also really love that Danny doesn't have some major epiphany, or anything, but that things just sort of quietly click - that just how I always imagine it going, for them.

Excellent fic!

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