Nicely done! I really love the way you wrote that hug, the way it turned into something more - it was done just exactly right. I'm so glad you wrote H50 fic!
This is really, really fantastic! I think you've got their dynamic down perfectly, and I especially love that there's a place for their banter even in a more serious sitaution; I think it just highlights the way they balance each other out really well. I also like how it happened - that it's a comforting hug that kind of gets away from Steve a little, because I kind of like that he just can't help himself. I also really love that Danny doesn't have some major epiphany, or anything, but that things just sort of quietly click - that just how I always imagine it going, for them.
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Excellent fic!
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