FF: Take a Bow (Part 1)

Nov 07, 2011 14:28

Title: Take a Bow (Part 1)
Pairing: Leslie, Ben, Leslie/Ben (with cameos by almost everyone else)
Word Count: ~7,900 (this part)
Rating: PG-13
Timeline: This starts after 4x03 "Born and Raised" and will proceed to move through canon up to 4x06 "End of the World" at which point it will likely take a hard left unless canon really surprises me.
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leslie knope, fanfic, ben wyatt, parksandrec, leslie/ben

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kyrieanne November 7 2011, 23:23:34 UTC
I am trying to decide which pov I adore more: Leslie's or Ben's. Both are fabulous and both show how well you think through the characters and their motivations. All that hard work shows. :) I think I like Leslie's more simply because you do such a beautiful of job of making her seemingly "fine"-ess not be her pretending to be fine or her actually being completely fine, but an in-between that is real and human ( ... )

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lunamystik November 7 2011, 23:34:29 UTC
Yes, yes, yes! I need this fic so bad right now... Leslie/Ben is breaking my little shipper heart, and I need an author like you to help me put everything in perspective.

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fromahippie November 7 2011, 23:39:33 UTC
This fic is so so good.
Tne office supplies bit was so so sweet.
Love the Galileo reference, that was awesome.

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

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throwingpens November 7 2011, 23:48:15 UTC
You're breaking my heart. I can't have them not end up together. I can't. I couldn't take it. Because "the one he fell for first and hardest, is Leslie Knope, Deputy Director of Parks and Recreation for the City of Pawnee" and Ben not end up together but I think that's maybe where you're going and it's literally killing me.

The way you weave stories together is brilliant. I can *feel* the things that they're feeling, and that means something. It's not just a story, it's someone's life. You always manage to do that in a way that my reviews can't express.

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sonni89 November 7 2011, 23:58:10 UTC
Oh my god, let me die. This killed me in the best/worst way. UGH THIS SEASON MAKES ME SO SAD FOR THEM.

I particularly loved the part about the pens and index cards for some reason, it was the absolute best. :)

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