Fic Update: Felon Fodder, Chapter 14

[daedream_fanbot]

Hope you folks haven't forgotten about this one. Bet you're wondering what took so long. And you may not figure it out after you read this chapter. Nothing necessarily big happens in this one, but maybe that was why it was so hard to write. Anyway, I hope this peaks your interest again, and I'll try to update a little more regularly. I'll try.

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Comments

[thatotherperv]

aww, this was a great chapter! worth waiting for. I love the family of sorts they've built for themselves. I enjoy the way that you're treating the inmates--that mixture of wariness and trust. real crimes but real people underneath.

I'm wary of CK. I'm wary of Watcher, and glad that Spike is as well.

and the spander scene at the end. you broke my heart and then stitched it all back together again. spike's insecurity and loneliness is a *tangible* thing. gah. I really love their relationship.

[daedream_fanbot]

I love the family of sorts they've built for themselves. I enjoy the way that you're treating the inmates--that mixture of wariness and trust. real crimes but real people underneath.
Spike and Xander are a great team, but everybody needs as many good friends as possible (just ask Buffy!).

I'm wary of CK. I'm wary of Watcher, and glad that Spike is as well.
Good guys/bad guys - there are no black and white hats in prison...or are there?

Thanks, sweetie!

[thatotherperv]

oh! and congrats :)

[sparrow2000]

Whee, so excited to see more of this. On a clock now, so don't have time to comment properly, but on first reading this story is just as brilliant as I remembered.

Proper coherent commentary when I get a moment.

Twirls you madly for posting and giving me something to look forward to when I've got time to read again.

[daedream_fanbot]

Oooh, dizzy from the twirling! I hope not to wait too long between posting!

[denied_heaven]

congrats!
and oh man the drama haha
*is wary of watcher too but it could possibly be a good thing*
and awwwwwww the numbers thing and the poker and *sigh* kisses
so good
*uneasy bout the watching* ee

[daedream_fanbot]

thanks!
Happy I got you wondering and wary!

[jans_intentions]

I really like when Xander thought of 'home' it was in conjunction with Spike. That was interesting.

Still haven't made my mind up about Watcher.

I actually can see why this took a while. You worked on the theme, with Xander feeling more relaxed in the company of ordinary men. Spike and Xander's passion continues to grow, but at a slow burn. Two tired men who wanted comfort, which was lovely.

[daedream_fanbot]

Sometimes I think I try for a tad too much in a chapter, but it just flows this way, and I like to think that by the end of each chapter, the characters have progressed in some way. That can be challenging to perfect each time. But I like a challenge!