daegunkoh
Jun 21, 2006 00:29
Okay, I think I know what's been wrong with my works. Not enough scenery. It's all been metaphors and puns. I need atmosphere! So, here are my options. I either re-write it and tweak it to make it all Ominpotent Singular point-of-view. It's that, or I re-write it as a script. Hmm, what to do, what to do...
daegunkoh
Mar 29, 2006 11:52
Updated my layout. You know how to get there.