Title: Marry Me …
Chapter: 5
Author: daisyb10
Rating: MA
Warning: For Mature Adults Only. 18 years +
Prompts: Written for the Saturday Night Writing Challenge at Fox/House. The prompt for this story was a photograph of a group of penguins perched on a rocky ledge
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Daisy
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I only hope when he proposes, which I know he's going to surprise me even though I kind of know its coming (nine years in the making after all though we hope Cameron and House don't take nearly as long as all that) that it will be this lovely and romantic for the both of us.
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Aww ... that's nice. Thank you.
I'm sure you proposal will be magical - you sound like you're very much in love with your boyfriend.
Maybe he'll pop the question over the holidays ...
Wishing you all the best,
Daisy
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I have just one small concrit, though - as a reader I found it really glaring to imagine House getting married without his parents being there. He's no momma's boy, but we have seen him call his mum on the show at times, and I think he'd tell his folks about Cameron. Also, some brief mention of Cams' family members attending - or not would be appropriate.
Weddings are about love and union and commitment, but they are also about family. I'm not even saying family has to be there, but a sentence or two to explain their absence would be helpful.
Beyond that one small detail, I'm really enjoying your story...as well as eagerly anticipating the next part!
Well done.
--T.
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment and I'm very pleased that you're enjoying "Marry Me". I like to believe that there's a romantic side of House just waiting to be brought out.
Regarding their parents, I do agree that weddings are about family and without spoiling the story for you, I'll just say that the "parents" storyline was planned for the next chapter, so not to worry. There is actually a brief reference to Cameron's parents in chapter 5.
Thank you for taking the time to comment. I apppreciate it,
Daisy
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You're very kind and I truly appreciate the compliment.
And I do have good news. I'm back working on this story and there should be some new chapters within a couple of weeks.
Thank you so much for reading "Marry Me".
Daisy
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Yes, I'm definitely continuing "Marry Me" through to its conclusion, probably within the next couple of weeks.
My puppy became quite ill in the New Year and this story was shifted to the back burner, but thankfully she is better and I'm writing again.
I'm happy to know you're enjoying the story so far.
Daisy
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