Marry Me ... - Chapter 5

Dec 13, 2007 00:48


       Title:                Marry Me …

Chapter:           5

Author:             daisyb10

Rating:             MA

Warning:          For Mature Adults Only. 18 years +

Prompts:          Written for the Saturday Night Writing Challenge at Fox/House. The prompt for this story was a photograph of a group of penguins perched on a rocky ledge ( Read more... )

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sweetgreuy December 14 2007, 00:05:32 UTC
thought i leave one here too, daisy. really really loved.

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daisyb10 December 14 2007, 05:28:42 UTC
That's so nice of you, Gracie. Thank you.
Daisy

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sweetgreuy December 14 2007, 05:31:48 UTC
no prob. i leave double comments to my favorite people.

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Interesting... diagnosticmad December 14 2007, 02:59:23 UTC
It's funny I came upon this...my boyfriend and I have been talking about an engagement ring and reading this had me feeling all happy and cheesy imagining when he's going to propose to me.

I only hope when he proposes, which I know he's going to surprise me even though I kind of know its coming (nine years in the making after all though we hope Cameron and House don't take nearly as long as all that) that it will be this lovely and romantic for the both of us.

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Re: Interesting... daisyb10 December 15 2007, 03:36:16 UTC
Hi diagnosticmad,

Aww ... that's nice. Thank you.
I'm sure you proposal will be magical - you sound like you're very much in love with your boyfriend.

Maybe he'll pop the question over the holidays ...

Wishing you all the best,
Daisy

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Loverly! tek_noir December 14 2007, 15:44:25 UTC
this is a beautiful story and I've really enjoyed reading it, so thank you for the lovely portrayal. I totally can see House being this way deep down.

I have just one small concrit, though - as a reader I found it really glaring to imagine House getting married without his parents being there. He's no momma's boy, but we have seen him call his mum on the show at times, and I think he'd tell his folks about Cameron. Also, some brief mention of Cams' family members attending - or not would be appropriate.
Weddings are about love and union and commitment, but they are also about family. I'm not even saying family has to be there, but a sentence or two to explain their absence would be helpful.

Beyond that one small detail, I'm really enjoying your story...as well as eagerly anticipating the next part!
Well done.
--T.

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Re: Loverly! daisyb10 December 14 2007, 17:36:08 UTC
Hi tek noir,

Thank you for your thoughtful comment and I'm very pleased that you're enjoying "Marry Me". I like to believe that there's a romantic side of House just waiting to be brought out.

Regarding their parents, I do agree that weddings are about family and without spoiling the story for you, I'll just say that the "parents" storyline was planned for the next chapter, so not to worry. There is actually a brief reference to Cameron's parents in chapter 5.

Thank you for taking the time to comment. I apppreciate it,

Daisy

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lilyan1318 March 26 2008, 14:29:33 UTC
Wow! This has got to be one of the greatest stories I've ever read, hope to get more soon! :)

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daisyb10 March 28 2008, 02:22:33 UTC
Thank you, lilyan.

You're very kind and I truly appreciate the compliment.
And I do have good news. I'm back working on this story and there should be some new chapters within a couple of weeks.

Thank you so much for reading "Marry Me".

Daisy

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mrsdrhouse April 24 2008, 18:22:15 UTC
I so hope you're going to continue this fic. You can't leave us hanging there! They need to get married!

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daisyb10 April 26 2008, 05:02:07 UTC
Hi mrsdrhouse,

Yes, I'm definitely continuing "Marry Me" through to its conclusion, probably within the next couple of weeks.

My puppy became quite ill in the New Year and this story was shifted to the back burner, but thankfully she is better and I'm writing again.

I'm happy to know you're enjoying the story so far.

Daisy

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