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[danceswithants]

So I need to choose two of my best poems for this poetry contest, and I don't know which two to pick. And I think I've narrowed it down to three. Maybe four. But if you would like to read them and tell me which two are the best, or how I could make them better, then go to the links below.

http://allpoetry.com/poem/2740222
http://allpoetry.com/poem/

Comments

[bucklemy_shoe]

I like the first one and the last one the most, and the second one is pretty close.
good job sonya. ofcourse, I already knew you were amazing, but now I have more reasons to believe so.
chyeah!
<3

[danceswithants]

thank you.
<3

[ldn_undrgrd]

i think the last two are the strongest

[danceswithants]

thank you.
I think I should fix the last one. I like the ideas, but not so much the poem itself.