FIC: Keeping Up With the Joneses Ch. 11

[dancingelf88]

Title: Keeping Up with the Joneses
Author: dancingelf88
Rating: Mature
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Disclaimer: If only….
Summary: Luke and Noah Jones live a mundane happy life until a secret shatters their world

Chapter XI: Plan B

Comments

[wheelie47]

Congratulations on an awesome story!

Love... love your version of Nuke in this.

Fantastic x

[dancingelf88]

Thank you! I love this movie too. Thanks for commenting...happy that you enjoyed this

[sweetiejelly]

This was so fast paced and lovely. I think I loved it more than the movie.

“On a scale of 1-10…how happy are you?” Noah asked.

Luke cocked his head slightly, grabbed a fistful of Noah’s shirt, and planted a wet kiss on him.

“11.” Luke answered. He grabbed Noah’s hand as they leapt off the building to the ground below.
♥! And I had a flash of River Song jumping out of the window into the Tardis.

[dancingelf88]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. And thank you for commenting <3

[newhaven183]

It made me laugh...made me cry...made me shout and cheer...made me so damn glad to be one of yr readers. God this was so good...two James Bonds for the price of ....whatever!

[dancingelf88]

At least you were entertained. Thank you for commenting. Glad to have you as a reader :D

[pirl]

SO. MUCH. FUN! Action, sex, boys being cute, humor.. what's not to love! I confess that I've never seen the movie this is based on, but I'm going on Netflix as soon as I hit the Post button. :D

Awesome fic!

[dancingelf88]

It's such a good movie! It won't change your life but it is a lot of fun and Brad and Angelina are smokin hot in it. Thank you so uch for reading and commenting! I'm happy that you enjoyed it so much! Now go watch that movie! (Mr & Mrs. Smith)

[asonearth]

wow, you turned my first day off work into such an incredible monday.. can't remember the last time i enjoyed a monday that much. it was a perfect story, with a perfect set up, liked the look back to when/how they met, and how you unfolded all these layers little by little. and look how far they've come :) glad the therapy worked for them..haha and i have to tell you your Casey is FTW.. i always loved Casey with Noah and it was so easy to picture him.
thanks for writing and sharing this amazing story <3 Annette

[dancingelf88]

Awww thank you so much! I'm glad I could help make your day off nicer :). I've always loved Casey and his friendship with Noah. Ultimate bromance. Thank you for commenting!